SOULSPEAK
The
Outward
Journey
of
the
Soul
Justin Spring
Foreword by Stephen Larsen
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Here’s what others are saying about SOULSPEAK:
The Outward Journey of the Soul:
“Justin
Spring’s poetry, writings, and accompanying recordings resonate with something
deep inside us all that is longing to be touched. I felt myself yearning for, and in connection with, deep mystery
while reading and listening to the SOULSPEAK materials. I find Mr. Spring’s
work with disenfranchised individuals to be a beacon that may be a means out of
the darkness that inhabits much of our present day lives.”
Jerry
Wellik, Ed.d. Professor of Special
Education, St. Cloud State University
“Here
is a book that really explains not only the origins of poetry, but how today we
can again create poetry as a form of the soul speaking. Justin Spring is
passionate and compelling in his pursuit of this pure poetry, what he calls
“the outward journey of the soul.” And in his text he teaches all of us how to
speak from a deeper place, letting the unconscious, or the soul, rise up into
language and art. Taking us step by step through the process, he provides
specific techniques to break through old boundaries and limitations. Spring’s
many years of leading poetry workshops have produced a very clear, strong,
almost prophetic sense of where art and truth lie, and—more importantly—how to
achieve them.”
Victoria
Sullivan, poet, playwright, editor of PLAYS BY AND
ABOUT WOMEN
“In an age in which so much of what people say is social
gambit, political rhetoric, make talk cliché, I applaud Justin Spring’s
powerful technique for returning us to what is truly important, a language that
means something, and that
echoes
vertically as well as sending out ripples horizontally; that is to say, it
combines communication with a reference to the soul and the realm of the
invisibles. It is a language that you could never be ashamed of having spoken,
because you would like these words to echo around the eaves of the universe.
They are beautiful, incantatory, descriptive, and wise. They are the glittering
mantle in which the soul likes to wrap itself.
SOULSPEAK
hovers between the realms of the shaman’s magic and the priest’s incantation,
the artist’s stroke, and the philosopher’s insight. Poetry is a calculus of the
emotions, and if the poem is designed for immortality, also a calculus of the
spirit. It describes a curve, an acceleration of realization, an epiphany; in
short, the movements of the soul.
I
advise you to work with this book experientially, try the exercises, sense the
vast imponderable soul-animal Spring invokes for us, lying beneath us. Think
that God is hovering nearby, just waiting to borrow your voice.”
Dr. Stephen Larsen,
Professor Emeritus SUNY, co-author of A
FIRE IN THE MIND, A LIFE OF JOSEPH CAMPBELL.
Snow Angels
I was six. No, five, I was five: my
first snow.
I remember the angel suddenly coming
together
and then bleeding out underneath me
like I was turning myself inside out,
and then I remember awakening
to a white field, because the angels
were always a surprise to me,
the way they kept falling in such
peculiar positions, like someone
screaming, or dying.
Like the wings.
Friends would take me aside,
tell me the wings were a bit too much:
Like a Babylonian lion's, really.
Those wings, they'd say.
They were right of course,
but what could I say to them except
I couldn't help it, that my arms
always moved up and down like that
whenever I fell down out of heaven.
Sometimes I felt like telling them
maybe it would help
if they thought of the angels
as small relief-maps of my soul,
sudden, uncontrolled curdlings
that occurred whenever I
stopped, opened myself
to the sun, or the moon.
And then there were times
I didn't know what to say, except
maybe they should think of them
as
detailed descriptions of another life.
A
life I was living but knew nothing about.
Author’s Note
If You Have
Purchased This Book Without a CD
Some versions of
this book are sold without the accompanying CD. If you have purchased such a
version, please be assured it is the same book and can be read and enjoyed as
is.
The purpose of the
CD is to guide you in creating your own poetic speakings. The oral art
of speaking is best learned by listening to it and imitating it. As you
listen, your body will begin to remember this ancient, sacred way of speaking.
You can hear what SOULSPEAK
sounds like by visiting our web page, www.soulspeak.org and selecting Many
Voices. You can order the SOULSPEAK: The Outward Journey of the Soul
CD via the web, or at a special, reduced price, by using the order form at the
back of this book.
Acknowledgments
This book would
never have been written without the aid of my partner in SOULSPEAK,
Scylla Liscombe, because without her persistence, encouragement, and insight, SOULSPEAK
might never have taken form. I would also like to thank the following poets and
musicians and singers, all of whom have been instrumental in the ongoing
development of SOULSPEAK as an art form: Joan Adley, Gary Drilling,
Ellie Silver, John Le Gasse, Jack Notestein, George de Jong, Eric Wachsman,
Jimi Gee, Jane Odle, and Ally Smith. I also owe a huge debt to the teachers,
therapists, and students of the Sarasota County School system for providing
crucial feedback on the SOULSPEAK process over the years. I would be
amiss if I didn’t thank the many others who have assisted in preparing and
evaluating the manuscript as it took form: Jan Dorsett, who was instrumental in
shaping this book, Wayne Bussone, Norma deSofi, Lea and Cliff Huxford, Victoria
Sullivan, Fran Johnson, and Meg Chow. And finally, I can find no words adequate
enough to thank Pauline Spring, my former wife, friend, and the woman who gave
me back my true life.
About
the Author
Justin Spring resides in Sarasota, Florida.
His poems have been published in such distinguished periodicals as American
Poetry Review, Passages North, and Organica as well as numerous
anthologies. He is the recipient of many prizes and honors and is the author of
two collections of poems: Polaroid Poems, published in 1995 by White
Eagle Coffee Store Press; and Other Dancers, published in 1991 by March
Street Press. Mr. Spring’s oral poetry can be found on the following Many
Voices/Soulspeak Studio recordings: Gathering (1997), Smoke
(1998), Nursery Raps (1998), Speakings (1999), and In Your
Mind (2001). Mr. Spring is the founder of SOULSPEAK/Sarasota Poetry
Theatre and the originator, along with Scylla Liscombe, of SOULSPEAK, a
contemporary version of ancient oral, antiphonal poetry. He is also the
developer of Therapeutic SOULSPEAK, a specialized version of SOULSPEAK
used by at-risk children and adults in therapy. Mr. Spring was educated at
Columbia College.
Foreword
Dr.
Stephen Larsen
The concept of soul, until the
European Enlightenment, has never been disputed in world culture. “Animism,”
the oldest mythological stratum according to classical Anthropology, and found
on every continent, holds that the entire world is filled with spirit. The idea
is glimpsed in the Paleolithic images of dancing shamans, in ceremonial burials
in Egypt, in Socrates’ speculations, in Vedic texts, and in fact, in most world
mythologies, which envision a soul which “incarnates” in this world, and when
the body dies, moves on to a world of spirits, rejoins the ancestors, dissolves
into multiple souls, or comes back for another go-round (re-incarnation). In
ancient China the soul was seen as compound, some parts falling back into Earth
at death while others transmigrated into ethereal heavens. In Christianity, the
soul was not only believed to transcend death, but then to stand before God and
receive judgment for deeds done while alive in the world (which was the
theologians’ answer to how God could allow a world so filled with unfairness as
this one, to exist).
In the seventeenth century,
Descartes, like many of his contemporaries, was seeking to reconcile the older
mythic-theological idea with the new revelations of the physical sciences. He
would find the “seat” of the soul in the anatomy. His conclusion was that it
dwelt, somehow, in the pineal gland, like a squirrel in its nest. An eighteenth-century
scientist turned visionary, Emanuel Swedenborg, made a more plausible
guess—that it lay in the cerebral cortex (now recognized as the seat of the
“higher faculties”).
Through the nineteenth century,
science was discovering the enormous complexities of physiology, and
particularly the human nervous system. We were now to be seen as the bi‑products
of chemistry and biology, with a veneer of social learning. “Nature vs.
Nurture” was the controversy of the day. (But the argument left the soul out
entirely.) After the discovery of the “bilateral functioning of the cerebral
hemispheres” (attributed to Hughlings Jackson in 1864), and the revelations of
the psychologies of the unconscious, with Sigmund Freud and Carl Jung, it began
to be suspected that there was a split at the root of our natures—between the
left hemisphere (words and reason) and the right hemisphere (images and myths).
[Note that because of a crossover in our anatomy, symbolically, the left
hemisphere controls and relates to the right hand, and all symbolism of the
“right.” While the right hemisphere relates to the left hand, and the symbolism
of the “left” including that which is sinister (Latin-Italian) and gauche
(French), but which also includes intuition and mental imagery.]
And guess what? Most of the very
thinking and communicating about this problematical split has been in words.
The left hemisphere, historically, has been in the ascendancy! (Though in
Julian Jaynes “Bicameral Mind” theory, the rational ego side equated with the sense
of “I” is subject to encounters with the non-dominant hemisphere, which
produces hallucination-like experiences interpreted by a person who has them as
the voice of a god. Thus the revenge of the non-dominant hemisphere; it
pronounces like an oracle or a hidden god, deus absconditus. The
non-dominant hemisphere is not only the “underdog,” but a crafty one, who
manages to get his way through something other than “reason.”)
To be sure, the soul waited in the
wings. (See, our metaphor turns visual.) Exiled from the social sciences, soul
lurked in the humanities, literature, music, the arts. Joyce, Yeats, Pound,
Eliot, Picasso, Debussy. (The soul announces itself even when movements, such
as Surrealism, Dada, or Existentialism pronounce its annihilation, because at
least it is treated as a worthy antagonist.) And we know how Picasso was unable
to keep “primitive art” out of his paintings (more on this in the book) and an
unbelievable sense of the daemonic seems to follow his very line.
But what is soul? Is it a “divine
fire,” a fragment of God embodied in ourselves? The capacity to dream and to
create? An hallucination? An epiphenomenona, a mere by-product of a
brain that contains ten billion neurons (and so it has to entertain itself with
the fantasy of immortality, as well as trying to figure out the universe—a task
at which it keeps perpetually failing)? Or is it language, the godlike ability
to create realities through words, explored years ago by Ernst Cassirer, and
currently debated by Leonard Schlain in The Goddess and the Alphabet?
(Where words are seen associated with patriarchy, and images and symbols with
the antique cult of the Great Goddess are associated with matriarchy). Or is
the soul consciousness itself, that flickers out when the brain perishes?
Clearly it has to do with the way our brains and bodies are organized, so let
us pursue this track just a little.
All of the best arts span the human
hemispheres, our two kinds of mentality, and thus represent what makes us
wholly and completely human: When we try to describe the emotional meaning of
an experience, paint an idea, critically analyze a symphony or a painting,
introduce a pastel, romantic atmosphere into a novel, or write a poem that puts
images into structured language. We rely on soundtracks in movies to tell us
what the emotional “take” on the scene is to be. (And we think of the small boy
who said to his parents after seeing a movie of a mugging ambush on a street,
“I wouldn’t have gone around that corner if I’d heard that music playing!”) The
soul seems to arise as our experience arises; it is alive, and lives where we
live; it is neither this nor that, but both and . . .
The soul is there, as the poet
Novalis declared, in the “overlap” between the worlds, where “the inner world
meets the outer world.” It is also there where the left meets the right, where
the swirling waveforms from each hemisphere intersect and create moiré
patterns, where images appear out of the smoke, where we are truly haunted.
This, then, leads us to the subject
of this book, and to some stories. [Developmental Psychologist Jerome Bruner
says that not until we have “narratized” our experience (that is, made it into
a story) can we understand it. Word and image, causal inferences, are
associated with the left hemisphere. It tells us of the denotative, dictionary
meanings of the words and action. But the right hemisphere makes it all make
sense in an emotional way. We look at the characters, the situation, and make
feeling inference: “If he did this and this, he must have meant that . . .”
Story brings words to life.]
Sometimes stories can even nest
within stories, and poems as well, as you will see.
The manuscript of SOULSPEAK: The
Outward Journey of the Soul arrived just a little before Woodstock’s first
International Poetry Festival (August 2001). I carried it with me in my
briefcase as I went from the theater to the library, to the cafés in town. I
heard many dozens of poets recite or read works that varied from the exquisite
to the excruciating. But great poets were there: Robert Bly, Billy Collins,
Edwin Sanders, Janine Vega, Mikhail Horowitz, intoning and incanting in the
bosky vale beneath the late-summer Catskill mountains. And soul in a large
sense was present. The readings were passionate, piquant, hilarious, and the
hip audience as one organism often laughed at subtle lines in long poems. There
was no lack of attention to the poetic experience; in fact, the group’s
attention hovered like an invisible entity above the rustic Bearsville theater,
discerning, humorous, palpable. The ghosts of Utopian experiments and failed
artists’ colonies, Beat poets and psychedelic hipsters gathered around. The air
was thick, actinic, volatile.
Between the events, my wife Robin
and I went out to a little park behind the theater, with the Aesopus Creek
babbling softly nearby. Late afternoon sunlight slanted through the pine and
hemlock, tinting pink the exposed granite boulders in the creek bottom.
Robin (pretty and brunette, my wife
of thirty-seven years) was lulled by a glass of wine at our creekside brunch,
and an overrich diet of mental imagery. She lay curled and sleepy on the soft
moss. I sat on a little stone bench and read the instructions for how to
“SOULSPEAK.” We used the seed words: “mountain, love, green, arms, mother,
cold, window.” I don’t think Robin understood the instructions exactly, so
sleepy she was, and that she was allowed to take each seed word and make a
separate sentence of it, pausing in between to let images form. So she spoke
almost all of them at once. “In the warm darkness, under the mountain, my
mother sits in her green dress. The arms of her love cradle all our cold
shadows.”
Rich imagery flooded my mind and I
felt an unexpected rush of emotion at what Robin had just said. I was glimpsing
the power of the oral tradition, and the authority of the voice that came with
it: the authentic poetic voice that Justin Spring would teach us to evoke, in
this book.
There were definitely bad poets at
the festival too, so comparison was easy. When they read, shouted, droned, or kvetched,
I would find myself distracted, or bored, if not just pissed off. But when the
poet touched that subterranean power that Spring talks about, my attention was
rapt, breathless, respectful. I thought of the archetypal Bard, Taliesin, who
rebuked the false poets, praise singers of the cruel King Maelgwyn. Taliesin
said that poetry was a “divine fire” and not to be used carelessly, or for the
vain praise of men.
As I sat in the warm darkness under
the mountain, the scale and implications of what my friend Justin Spring was
trying to do broke through. He was trying to teach the art of touching divine
fire, and not just for poets in a rarified atmosphere, but for youth at-risk in
a ghetto—for the elemental human soul. My mind felt joyous for the path Spring
had chosen, not only a path with heart, but one with soul. It was an authentic
spiritual experience, without the trappings of religion, to learn the elemental
voice, the soul’s voice, that depends, beautifies, and ennobles all our
experience.
My mind went back to Columbia
University in 1960, when Justin and I were students there. Columbia was a
galaxy of talent in those days: Mark van Doren (and his famous son Charles),
F.W. Dupee, Lionel Trilling, Jacques Barzun. While the “pre-meds” lurked in the
back of our brownstone fraternity house, poring over their books, the
“humanities” guys gathered around the front room, the “triple,” where Justin
and his friend Joe dwelt—which also became a salon for profound ideas and
amazing metaphysical discussions, going on far into the night: Joyce, Pound,
Eliot, and Yeats were our main menus.
One semester, finals were fast
approaching. At these fey and unstable times Columbia students would respond to
the tension either by cramming desperately on the one hand, or escaping to the
nearby West End bar on the others. Sometimes the tension exploded into an orgy
of water balloon fights up and down the halls. (I think we were all ADD, as
well as fairly bright.) Back in at the “triple” Justin Spring and his friend
Joe suddenly decided to draw a full, wall-size copy of Michelangelo’s Damned
Sinner. They worked for days on the masterpiece. When they were finished,
all the bleary-eyed “brothers” came to marvel at this final triumph of the
right hemisphere—even during the great apotheosis of the left (the final
exams). And sure enough, after the “imagery buffers” had emptied themselves out
in this peculiar and wonderful way, Justin and Joe finished their term papers
in good style, and passed their finals.
A year or two after Justin graduated
(he was ahead of me), I had an opportunity to study with the poet Kenneth Koch.
Koch not only made poetry come alive for Columbia students, he did the same for
high school students in Harlem, just below Morningside Heights on the East
side, at a public school where he would teach once a week. He would greet the
sea of African and Hispanic faces with “Good morning, poets!” He made poetry
come alive for them, and them for us. Koch read us their poems, and them ours,
closing a circuit between both populations of his students.
This summer, one of our own projects
at the not-for-profit center my wife and I administrate was to teach Joseph
Campbell’s “hero’s journey” to inner-city high school students. Among other
projects, one of the most powerful was to make a mask. The masks empowered the
students to find their voices in much the same way as Koch and Spring did. In a
recent weekend public event in an inner-city park, the young people presented
their poems—some with masks and/or music. They also showed personal movies they
had made. Their families stood around proudly witnessing all the soul
talk—right there in the inner city. The atmosphere was magical and
unmistakable: “Hablamos Alma aqui.” (Soul is spoken here.) We make SOULSPEAK!
In an age in which so much of what
people say is social gambit, political rhetoric, make-talk cliché, I applaud
Justin Spring’s powerful technique for returning us to what is truly important,
a language that means something, and that echoes vertically as well as sending
out ripples horizontally; that is to say, it combines communication with a
reference to the soul and the realm of the invisibles. It is language that you
could never be ashamed of having spoken, because you would like these words to
echo around the eaves of the universe. They are beautiful, incantatory,
descriptive, and wise. They are the glittering mantle in which soul best likes
to wrap itself.
The best poets know this. They know
that if their words are not charged with emotion, painted with color, weighed
and balanced (internal structure), and graced with spirit, they will break up
like small inconsequential clouds and drift into the realm of unbecoming. The
poem should evoke something not graspable in any other way. SOULSPEAK hovers
between the realms of the shaman’s magic and the priest’s incantation, the
artist’s stroke and the philosopher’s insight. Poetry is a calculus of the
emotions, and if the poem is destined for immortality, also a calculus of the
spirit. It describes a curve, an acceleration of realization, an epiphany—in
short, the movements of soul.
I advise you to work with this book
experientially; try the exercises, sense the vast imponderable soul-animal
Spring invokes for us, lying beneath us. Think that God is hovering nearby,
just waiting to borrow your voice.
As one of my exercises, going
through the manuscript of SOULSPEAK, I did a written poem. Though I do
not consider myself a poet (I have a few prose books in print, and my last one,
The Fashioning of Angels, has just one poem of mine in it, and one from
my wife, Robin), I offer a piece of it to you the reader, nascent poet that you
are. (Good morning poets!) and potential student of SOULSPEAK. (To help
contextualize the poem, I will share with you that I had just come back from
Africa, where I had seen many animals in a marvelous game park in an
antediluvian volcano crater [The Pilansberg, it is called], and that a figure I
had seen in a filmstrip there, of a little bushman imitating an antelope,
lurked in my mind. Also, as I told you, I had just heard some bad poets. In the
poem I found myself comparing the “capturing” of the metaphors, images, and
words of live poetry to how we relate to animals. I saw all the word-creatures
in my mind standing there in their furry coats, the elegant eland, the lordly
lion, the disreputable warthog.)
Be like the Bushman
Don’t frighten the
children of your imagination, friend,
try not to come in
like a Boer beating the bush for beasts,
but a little
bushman, who mostly wants to learn their story.
So that, puckish, in
front of the communal fire,
your fingers in a
cone, with little pinky
horns to the side,
eyes bright as the
antelope, you unmistakably
mimic the creature’s
routine.
Everyone watches
(everyone listens)
and everyone understands.
Stephen Larsen,
Ph.D., is Professor Emeritus SUNY, and the author/editor of seven books
currently in print, among them The Shaman’s Doorway, and the Mythic
Imagination. With his wife, Robin, he co-authored, A Fire in the Mind,
The Life of Joseph Campbell, and The Fashioning of Angels:
Partnership as a Spiritual Practice. Stephen and his wife Robin co-direct
The Center for Symbolic Studies in New Paltz, New York (mythmind.com).
Table
of Contents
Introduction 1
Part
I ~ Background and History
Chapter
1 Speaking to the Gods 5
Chapter
2 Accepting Tribal Art 10
Chapter
3 The Vocabulary of Tribal Art 13
Chapter
4 The Soul’s Stories 17
Chapter
5 The Effect of Writing on
Consciousness 25
Chapter
6 Preliterate Poetry¾A Primer 27
Chapter
7 SOULSPEAK as a Participatory
Art 35
Part
II ~ Preparing to Speak
Chapter
8 The Communal Nature of SOULSPEAK
42
Chapter
9 SOULSPEAK as a Journey 44
Chapter
10 My Own Journey Continues 56
Part III ~
Creating a Speaking
Chapter
11 Creating a Speaking 61
Chapter
12 Some Additional Tips on Speaking
68
Chapter
13 Speaking and Responding 73
Chapter
14 Expanding SOULSPEAK 75
Chapter 15 Other SOULSPEAK
Catalysts 83
Chapter
16 SOULSPEAK as an Aid to
Writing Poetry 91
Part IV ~
Some Final Thoughts on SOULSPEAK
Chapter
17 Some Final Thoughts on SOULSPEAK 95
Part V ~ A
New Call for an Older Poetry
Introduction
to Part V 103
Chapter
18 The State of Contemporary Poetry 105
Chapter
19 What Oral Poetry Brings to the Table 110
Chapter
20 We Have Mistaken the Totem
for the God 113
Chapter
21 The Encroaching Sea of Orality 117
Chapter
22 Oral Poetry: Common and Uncommon
Speech 126
Chapter
23 The Transition from Oral to Written
Poetry 131
Chapter
24 A Brief History of Oral and Written
Poetry 135
Chapter
25 The Form of Oral Poetry 142
Chapter
26 The Difference Between Oral and
Written
Composition 146
Chapter
27 Let’s Pretend You’re an Epic Poet 158
Chapter
28 Oral Poetry as a Galapagos of Poetry 170
Chapter
29 Rap and Slam Poetry 172
Chapter
30 Performance and Music in Poetry 179
Chapter
31 Using Rap and Homer to Convince 186
the Skeptical
Afterword 192
Appendix 196
Introduction
This book is about
unlocking a source of beauty already within us—a source that has been with us
since we first became human. It is the first poetry—a musical, spontaneous
poetry that will rise out of us as easily as gossip does, once we reawaken it.
I call these poems speakings because they are created by two or more
people speaking out spontaneously from their deeper selves.
Some will be drawn to the history
and nature of this ancient poetry, and some to what it can teach us about
poetry in general. Others will be challenged to create their own speakings.
The
book has been laid out in five sections and an Appendix to accommodate the
needs of a wide range of readers:
• Part
I looks at preliterate, tribal poetry from an historical and artistic
perspective. The term speakings is introduced to describe that poetry.
• Part
II is background material about the nature of SOULSPEAK, a contemporary
version of preliterate speakings.
• Part
III details the actual SOULSPEAK processes used in creating a speaking.
• Part
IV looks at the value of speaking in contemporary life.
• Part
V looks at contemporary poetry through the lens of the ancient art of speaking.
Contemporary poetry, the art of Homer, and rap are examined under a new and
revealing light.
• The
Appendix contains detailed information on SOULSPEAK programs available
for the general public, at-risk children, and adults in therapy.
As
much of the material in this book has no counterpart, I would suggest that the
reader first approach the book as a whole and read it in its entirety, then
decide which sections are of primary interest.
Finally,
I’d like to say that this book was not created as an abstract exercise, but is
the end result of my efforts, along with Scylla Liscombe, my partner in SOULSPEAK,
to create a more speakable written poetry. These efforts eventually allowed us
to step through the looking glass into the ancient world of oral poetry. The
journey that awaited us was far beyond our expectations and still continues for
us. This book is an invitation for you to join us on that journey.
Envoi
I
would have preferred
teaching
you
by
speaking to you,
by
touching your face and lips
as
a blind man would.
But
as we are all
prisoners of time,
I
am sending you
this
offering, this shadow
of
my speaking.
I
send it out to you
like
Noah lofting his last dove,
not
knowing if it will ever reach
the
land of your body.
Not
knowing
if
you will ever feel
the
rush
of
its small fierce heart.
Part
I
1
Speaking
to the Gods
It
is the sound of the soul speaking.
SOULSPEAK.
Just the word, or the sound of it, seems to strike something deep inside
us. We look up expectantly, as if we somehow know what it means, but not quite.
When people ask me what I do for a living and I tell them SOULSPEAK,
they have that same look of expectancy and puzzlement. Then they break down and
ask me what it means, really. When I say it means just that, SOULSPEAK,
they accuse me of teasing them. Perhaps I am, but in a Socratic way, because
I’m trying to tease them into discovering what they already know. And they do
know what it means, because after a moment’s hesitation they almost always say
back, Yes, the soul speaking, or, Yes, speaking from
the soul, and then there’s a second moment of confusion because they don’t
really know what speaking from the soul means, even if they somehow
sense that it’s possible.
The
reason for the confusion is that we have forgotten how to do it. But if our minds
have forgotten, our bodies haven’t. It’s in our DNA—but hidden away,
recessive. Recessive is a good word in this case, like the recessive genes that
sometimes cause babies to be born with small tail-like appendages. A little
piggy reminder of our animal heritage. The act of speaking from the soul
also comes from our distant past. It is the way our tribal ancestors spoke to
the gods. They knew it was a different way of speaking than their
normal, everyday talk, or gossip. But they also knew it was somehow related, in
that it materialized as mysteriously as their everyday speech, but from a
deeper center of their beings, from their souls.
I
should say precisely what I mean by the soul, as there have been centuries of
religious, metaphysical, and philosophical discussions about its nature. While
I dismiss none of this out of hand, I’m suspicious of most organized thought. I
only know what I know, and what I know is that there is something very deep in
me, almost hidden from me, that is guiding me towards some end. What that end
is, I have no idea. Nor do I know why this is happening, or who is making it
happen, or what is its nature. I know only that it exists. I can feel it, and I
call it the soul, which is the word I use for my deepest, most mysterious
self. The soul is both me and not me. In some sense, the word soul
is really a metaphor for that most mysterious part of us that is utterly beyond
knowing, much as God is a metaphor for that indescribable mystery that is at
the heart of everything. What God actually is is beyond comprehension.
The same thing applies to the soul. I can’t tell you what it is, I can only
tell you stories about it. Here is one, a story of discovery:
You
are in a small boat, alone. You’re anxious, but not afraid. You know where
you’re going. Dover, then somewhere else, you say to
yourself. You’re ready for anything. And flexible. Hell, sometimes you change
directions just like that. At any rate, you have reasons for every move you
make: if not before the fact, then after. You’re sure of yourself, you have
maps, sextants, whatever, to guide you. You raise and lower sails; turn on,
turn off the motor as the mood suits you. You make port, just as you had
planned, but you’re slightly off, landing in Calais instead of Dover. You can’t
really say why.
Sometime
later, back at sea, you lean over the side. There is something thin, almost
invisible, like a line, attached to the bottom, leading down to the cavernous
depths. The line, if it is a line, seems infinitely long, almost numinous. It
comes and goes, as in a dream. As you watch, you sometimes see it moving in the
same direction as the boat, then sometimes in a different direction. When it
goes in a different direction, it pulls you slightly off course. Or at least
that’s how it feels. Calais instead of Dover, you say to
yourself. All of a sudden, something dark and glittery rises up from the
depths. You can almost see it. It is just beneath the surface, rippling the
water. You sense something familiar yet mysterious, something that is like you
and yet not you. You want to call it something, you’re not sure what. And then
it disappears. The soul is the term that suddenly comes to mind.
Later
on, you realize the boat shudders when it is not going in the same direction as
the soul. You don’t know why, but you guess it has something to do with the
strain on the line. But how do you keep in step with the soul? Something in you
says, Lean with it, whatever that means, and you do. The boat stops shuddering.
You’re in the groove, but absolutely in the dark as to where you’re going. But
you know it’s where you’re supposed to be going. For better, or for worse.
If
that little story describes a moment of awakening—the moment when you first
became aware of something utterly mysterious in your deepest self, something
that is you and yet not you—then the story has done its job. But
I’m still no closer to telling you what the soul really is. I can only tell you
its effects, much as physicists use a cloud chamber to prove the existence of
atomic particles. You never see the actual particles, only their traces. And
you never see the soul, only its traces, its effects. The soul can only be approached
indirectly, through stories.
Perhaps
I should tell you another story about the soul, one closer to the point of this
book, which is that speaking from the soul is an art we
have forgotten. It is a very human art, and it is in us, waiting to be reawakened.
Somehow, the body knows how to let the soul speak. We just have
to hear it and we can do it. Why? Because mimesis (imitation—the urge to
imitate, to replicate, to make) is an essential human urge. It is what drives
the creative artist to portray the world in a particular way, a way that
imitates the texture of the soul’s expressions.
None
of this is news. Without the urge to imitate, the soul’s messages would pass
through us like smoke through a forest. Because of our need to imitate,
however, all we have to do is witness (or experience) something that appeals to
us and something in us wants to replicate it—sometimes for better, sometimes
for worse. Insofar as the spoken arts are concerned, this is how we learn to
gossip, to make jokes, to speak from the soul. Here is another story. It
is a story about the soul speaking:
You
are in a boat, alone. Again. You keep busy, playing the radio, talking to
yourself. You remember someone telling you, you forget who, that whales are
always somewhere beneath you, singing their mysterious, elaborate songs. But
you have no way of knowing exactly where they are. How could you? The whales,
wherever they are, are in another world, one far beneath the surface of your
life. You hear only the music from your favorite station, your own mutterings.
Then,
for some reason, you become restless. Suddenly, the hull begins to throb so
loudly you vibrate like a string. You’re trembling, but not afraid. Somehow you
know what’s happening, even if you can’t quite put it into words. You don’t
know why, but you sense that something absolutely huge and wondrous is just
beneath the boat. You glance over the side. The water all around you is dark,
rippling like a shadow. You surrender to it, let it rise up through your body.
Something in you speaks. But the sound of your voice is different. Suddenly,
you realize what the sound is, why it is different. It is the sound of you and
not you. It is the sound of the soul speaking.
I
know you would like more precise directions on finding the whale, perhaps
positioning the boat, but they’re not necessary at this stage. That comes
later. All you have to do is accept the essential truth of the story: that
speaking from the soul is in us, that all we have to do is bring the self
and soul close enough and the body will take care of the rest. The
problem for us is that unlike tribal man, our souls have been layered over with
our modern consciousness, a consciousness much different from that of our
tribal ancestors, a consciousness that makes it much harder for us than it was
for tribal man to speak because, for us, the whale is too far beneath
the boat.
Just
what that distance is—the difference in consciousness between tribal and
modern man—is a matter of debate, but I think it is clear that prehistoric, preliterate
man operated in a different sea of consciousness than modern, literate man.
Tribal man lived more in the present, in the sea of is. Modern man, who
only occasionally lives in that sea, is preoccupied with the life inside his
mind, where he is constantly reliving his past and previewing his future.
Endlessly. Endlessly.
2
Accepting
Tribal Art
Everyone
was an artist because there was nothing else but art.
If we want to speak
from the soul, we have to somehow quell the busy nature of our modern
consciousness. That is what makes speaking so difficult for us. To put
it another way, we have to shorten the distance between the whale and the boat.
Some may question the value of going back to that state of consciousness. After
all, we are who we are: civilized, twenty-first century beings. Of what value
is the primitive soul-speaking of tribal man to us? This is a pivotal
question because it assumes that, unlike us, tribal man was simple, child-like,
inferior. But was he? Let’s just say he had a different sphere of attention. He
lived more in the sea of is. Because of that, he didn’t care about the
things we hold so dear.
To understand this we will have to
shake the belief of our nineteenth- (and sometimes twentieth-) century
forefathers that tribal man was inferior to modern (scientific, rational) man.
This conviction goes back to the early Greeks, whose highly developed sense of
language drove them to define everything they encountered (thus the cliché, “The
Greeks had a word for it.”) They gave us, for example, the word
barbarian (barbaros), because that is what the language of less verbally
developed races sounded like: bar-bar. Thick-tongued. Inferior.
But humans develop what they need.
An incredibly flexible language was obviously the key to expressing the Greek
genius. If you didn’t have it, the Greeks felt you were lost. Bar-bar.
But the “barbaric” peoples of the Sudan, for example, whom the Greeks obviously
encountered in their ancient travels, may not have needed a highly developed
language to express their genius. Perhaps rhythmic song was more to the point.
Whose cultural expression is transforming the arts around the globe today,
Greek succinctness or African song?
It is only in the twentieth century
that we begin to see ourselves truly awakening to the genius of tribal art,
because of the traffic in prehistoric masks and art, the small artifacts that
somehow survived the ravages of time. And, the time was right. Painters like
Picasso were looking for new ways of seeing. He recognized the genius of tribal
art and immediately incorporated it into his work. Others followed. It is
important to note that it was an artist who recognized the true worth of tribal
art. Picasso didn’t see it as primitive, child-like, stupid, but as insightful,
daring, beautiful. Indeed, it is difficult to find artists of any kind today
who don’t find the sculptures and glyphs and drawings of tribal man original
and stunningly beautiful.
This
didn’t just happen overnight. Eighteenth-century thought gave birth to the idea
of the noble savage, with all its implications for the Romantic movement
and the concept of the inherent dignity of man. But the actual savage seldom
benefited from his perceived “nobleness.” Certainly something genuine was being
perceived, as in the later nineteenth-century paintings of Rousseau and
Gauguin, but both those artists were ultimately concerned with their own ideas
of art, which had little to do with tribal art. Other than these early
glimmerings that the “primitive” held something valuable, the concept of the
noble savage seldom broke the surface of ideology into the world of equality.
Don’t forget that those same noble savages were enslaved by the millions, and
often by the same people who held them to be noble. It is really only when
tribal cultures are first perceived through their art, and not through
ideas, that we began to see the true power and beauty and intelligence of those
cultures. Why is this? Why did a twentieth-century artist like Picasso see the
power of tribal art? Why wasn’t it also seen by historians and anthropologists
and philosophers and critics and sociologists and mathematicians? And why
didn’t earlier artists see it?
Well,
perhaps some did, but maybe the time wasn’t right for it to be generally
accepted. When the time was right, however, it was an artist who first saw its
true worth. He saw it because, like himself, tribal man was an artist to the
bone. He expressed himself only through art, most of which was self-created.
Everyone was an artist because there was nothing else but art. Although this
surprises some people, there was no history or sociology or mathematics or
philosophy or anything else except art until the act of writing was invented.
So it is only natural that the true, perceptive link back to tribal man would
ultimately be made by an artist. It makes sense then that the conclusion many
artists have come to is very much to the point of this book: there is nothing
primitive or simple about tribal man, or his art. If art is any indicator of
“intelligence,” tribal man was the equal, if not the superior, of modern man.
3
The
Vocabulary of Tribal Art
We
are stories within stories within stories
There is another way
to describe the link between the artist and tribal man. If tribal man lived
easily in the deepest center of himself, in the sea of is, then he has a
sometime companion in the true artist. The true artist is a constant traveler
to the underworld of the soul—a traveler who reappears from time to time with
the gifts, or celebrations, we call art. Thus, it is easier for the true
creative artist to journey past the strange, alien surface of tribal art to see
it for what it truly is: a powerful portrayal of the soul, but a portrayal
whose vocabulary is closer to the vocabulary of the soul than the self.
What
I mean by the vocabulary of the soul is that the shapes, colors, words, images,
sounds, movements used in tribal art are not the realistic ones we have come to
favor in our art. If we put our various abstract experiments in art aside, our
artists generally portray the world of the soul by using the realistic world of
the self. A cow looks like a cow, because that is what we want in our art.
Tribal man was aware of the realistic. He knew what a cow looked like, just as
he knew that the odd-shaped, flowing-line figure he drew of a cow was different
from the actual cow. He simply had a different way of getting to the heart of
the matter. His artist’s intuition told him that his odd, elastic line-figure
portrayed the spiritual essence of the cow. It was closer to the way the soul
recognizes the cow. So it is only natural that someone who lived closer to his
soul would portray the cow in these “unrealistic” terms. The idea of portraying
the cow realistically would never have occurred to him. This closeness of self
and soul is what often makes tribal art seem child-like to us, despite its
often bizarre and mysterious subject matter. Like tribal art, a child’s stick
figure drawings are as real to him as the imaginary friend who visits him every
afternoon. This is because the child still has one foot firmly placed in the
sea of is. In that, he is very much like tribal man. The bones in his
head haven’t completely sealed yet. There are still openings. Little cracks.
Fissures.
Like
tribal art, our dreams also employ a vocabulary closer to the soul than the
self, and this sometimes makes them appear as strange—as alien—as tribal art.
In very early tribal art, one detects an elastic sense of dimension, time,
place, and identity. It is the same elastic sense we detect in our dreams. This
is a reflection of tribal art’s closeness to the soul, because it reflects the
fact that the soul exists both in time and out of time. This is because the
soul is both us and not us. Because the not us exists in a
mysterious, unknowable world, we could hardly expect the demarcations of time
and place and identity to be as precise as they are in our waking life. This
sense of imprecision occurs only to modern man. Tribal man, on the other hand,
saw the elasticity of his art as very precise, because it perfectly reflected
the true world of the soul.
This
may be tricky ground. Some will say that all vocabularies are vocabularies of
the self—that the soul has none. Perhaps on the very deepest
level, they’re correct. But the earlier metaphor of our total awareness as an
ocean that simultaneously supports the conscious self (the boat) and the whale
(the soul) is an apt one, because we can’t tell where the self stops and the
soul begins¾we
sense our awareness as a continuum. Sometimes that continuum is shaded more
towards the soul as we go deeper, and sometimes more towards the self as we
approach the surface of our consciousness. That continuum, however, exists only
in time. When we enter that timeless place that is also the soul—as through
very deep meditation—there is no way to talk about what we’re experiencing. It
simply is. It has no face.
As
an artist, however, I can’t stay there. In fact I don’t even want to be there
because I can’t make art until the soul has a face, or a voice, albeit a very
deep, very hazy, very mysterious one. In the world of the soul I inhabit, the
soul has already crossed into time. And as an artist, I am standing at that
threshold. In that world—the world all artists have inhabited since the
beginning of time—it is impossible to say where the self stops and the soul
starts: where me becomes not me. The soul has many faces.
And many voices. And all of them are you. And not you
I
don’t mean to make too much of the closeness of the artist to tribal man. It’s
somewhat misleading. At best, today’s artists hear only whispers of what those
ancient tribal artists heard—those artists who inhabited the soul’s world
almost continuously, so much so as to humble the most gifted of us. While it is
sometimes easier for the artist to get past the seemingly strange surface of
tribal art, there are times when we all can begin to experience its power and
beauty. When we do, we dispel forever the idea that these people were primitive
with nothing to teach us. This happens when tribal art bears a close
resemblance to contemporary art. Two rare and notable examples are the
thirty-thousand-year-old cave paintings of bison at Lascaux, in France and
Altamira, in Spain.
How
these miraculous paintings came to be is a mystery—a part of the mystery of
art. I believe that at each cave there was an initial artist of genius who
simply transcended his time, much as Homer and Michelangelo transcended theirs.
Homer and Michelangelo may have started in their time, but they didn’t end in
their time. The later dark, serpentine humor of the Odyssey is vastly
different from the early, statuesque nobility of the Iliad and
everything else of its time. And the last, ghost-like, barely formed Pietas
of Michelangelo are so different from his early, charged, highly polished David
and everything else of its time, that we can only conclude these artists
somehow burst out of the constraints of time. Indeed, in their later work,
Homer seems to be suddenly living in the time of Cervantes, and Michelangelo in
the time of Brancusi.
Thanks
to those nameless, preliterate artists at Lascaux and Altamira who also
transcended time, even the thickest of us can see that these prehistoric
people, despite their lack of shampoo and atom bombs, were not primitive in any
way whatsoever. They may have been more sophisticated in the ways of the soul
than we could ever expect to be. The cave paintings aside, what makes most
prehistoric art so difficult to “get” is that its surface is so
radically different from what we are used to seeing: a more realistic
representation of the world. Modern abstract art has taught us to see in a
different, “unrealistic” way, and may help us a bit in looking at tribal art.
But tribal art is not abstract in quite the same way as modern art is. Modern
abstract art is the result of an intellectual decision to challenge the eye.
The tribal artist, on the other hand, felt his “abstraction” to be real
beyond belief. I have no doubt the hair on the back of his neck rose up
when he looked at those intricate, abstract glyphs, much as ours does when we
look at Michelangelo’s sculptures. Maybe even more so.
To
understand why this is so, you have to throw out all the academic nonsense
about “art” and see it for what it really is. Once you strip away all the
ideologies and “isms” we have attached to art (and the act of artistic
creation), we can see art for what it truly is: a portrayal—or imitation, in human
terms—of the soul’s stories. For tribal man, those human terms had a
vocabulary closer to the soul than the self. That is why the
surface of tribal art seems so puzzling to us. We have to go deep to get it, if
we can. Once we understand this—that art is a conscious and unconscious
partnership between the self and the soul—we can look even more closely at its
true nature. For one thing, this partnership makes art different from our
dreams, which occur only when the self is asleep. For if it is the soul’s
inherent nature to express itself endlessly, both in our waking and sleeping
states, it is the self’s inherent nature to want to portray—to imitate—the
soul’s stories. And if you want to complete the circle, the soul’s stories can
be seen as portrayals (or imitations) of God’s story. What we have are those
endless, concentric, intertwining circles and curves we see everywhere in
tribal art. Tribal man had no trouble in portraying the essential mystery of
our existence: we are stories within stories within stories.
4
The
Soul’s Stories
The
soul can’t stop making itself up.
What is the soul
attempting to do by endlessly expressing itself every hour of our existence?
Who is it talking to, and why? We can’t really say. It is a mystery—so much a
mystery that just one aspect of it, dreaming, has baffled science. There is
constant talk about dreaming being the way the brain reorganizes its memories,
but it is clear to anyone concerned with matters of the soul that science is
only scratching the surface. And why not, since the only source of awareness
science recognizes is the mind, completely dismissing the soul. To have a real
understanding of the nature of our dreams, we have to accept that we have two
centers of awareness. One of these centers of awareness, the soul, is
utterly mysterious and beyond the knowing of science. All science can do is
describe the effects, like REM, the rapid eye movement that occurs when we
dream. Or what happens to us when we are deprived of dreaming for long periods.
(We become emotionally unbalanced.) One aspect of dreaming that makes it so
mysterious is that the soul doesn’t seem to care whether we consciously
partake of our dreams or not. It’s as if we were composed of two different sets
of consciousness. As if we were living two lives. Us and not us.
We all know people who go through entire lifetimes swearing they never dream.
We know this isn’t true, but what is true is that they somehow manage to
completely ignore their dreams. Like talk at a cocktail party.
Yet
the soul never stops dreaming. It can’t stop. It is the essential nature of the
soul to express itself. The ancient Jewish mystical teachings of the Kabbala
tell us that the soul is an actor. This has many implications, one of them
being that the soul has many faces, many voices. Strange though
it may seem to those who think of the soul as one, it was not strange to tribal
man. Only when the act of writing emerged and man became self-conscious
(capable of daydreaming) did we see the self gaining control and forcing
a unity upon the unknowable. One God. Prior to that, tribal man experienced the
unknowable as many gods, not one. And just as the concept of many gods was
accepted without question by tribal man, the idea of multiple souls, or
multiple portrayals of the soul, was equally accepted. Tribal man accepted
without question that it is the soul’s nature to express itself continually through
its endless stories of love and hate and life and death and fear and joy. What
we have to learn from tribal man is that the soul can’t stop making itself up.
Nor can we. Nor can God.
In the Many Voices section of the CD
accompanying this book, there is a speaking called “Prisoner of Time”
that celebrates this continual expression. It is not a speaking from
thirty thousand years ago, but a contemporary version of that art form I call SOULSPEAK.
(Note:
There are many other speakings on the CD. Begin listening to them, like
background music, whenever you can.)
First
close your eyes and listen to it in its oral, multi-voiced, musical form. It
loses its power when reduced to a written, single-voiced, non-musical state.
Here are some transcribed phrases, however, to give you an idea of its content:
God can’t stop making us up.
And
everything we touch.
We
are the sound of God speaking.
God
only speaks in time.
We
are the prisoners of time.
And
we are most us when we are
standing
on the glittery edge
where
God is making us up and we
are
making ourselves up
at
the same time.
This
speaking is concerned primarily with the mystery we call God. All we can
truly know about that mystery is what the character Pip (for example), in Great
Expectations, knows about Dickens: nothing. Pip exists for Dickens, but
Dickens doesn’t exist for Pip. Fate (a blindly felt moving force) does, but not
Dickens. Dickens is outside of Pip’s world—of Pip’s ability to imagine, to
know—just as God is beyond ours. We can only guess at God’s nature by
witnessing the effects of that nature. Like the French philosopher, Descartes,
if we look at these effects hard enough, and long enough, a pattern emerges.
That pattern, when you reduce it all down, consists of endlessly repeated forms
of creation and destruction: birth and death. Everything else is really a
subset of those two primal forces. We can also sense that they are linked in
some primal way, which in tribal art takes the form of the snake eating its own
tail. Those circles again.
How
do we make sense of these inter-linked cycles of creation and destruction? We
make sense of it through stories. Stories imitate that huge, intuitively sensed
but essentially unknowable story of unending birth and death we call God’s
story. The exact intent and structure of God’s story is never clear to us. We
sense the story only indirectly. We have no idea of the plot, the characters,
the words. How could we? After all, we are only the sound of God
speaking.
The
relation of novelist to hero is an apt one because Dickens’ intent is never
clear to Pip. It can’t be. If anything, Pip feels what we feel: that something
larger is guiding us, but we don’t really understand what, or why. Again,
We
are the sound of God speaking.
Not the words. Not
the text. The sound. The vibration. The feeling. Because of this, the
best we can do is imitate the mystery through art: the snake eating its own
tail. And when we create stories that successfully imitate this mystery, we
immediately recognize them as intuitively true, and beautiful:
And
we are most us when we are
standing
on the glittery edge
where
god is making us up and we
are making ourselves up
at the same time
Keats
was right: Beauty is Truth, Truth Beauty. This then, the
portrayal of mysteries, is the essential function of art. Everything else is
secondary—runoff from the mainstream.
In this text two terms have been
interchanged: art and stories. This is because art is, in its most essential
form, a story. It is a story, however, created from a deeper level than mere
gossip, or jokes, which make up the bulk of our stories. Music is the one art
where the story has to be emotionally, almost intuitively grasped. There are no
characters, only emotional progressions, and in that sense music is extremely
close to the nature of the soul’s stories. Although there is no way of knowing,
my feeling is that the soul’s stories (or God’s story) are something like pure
emotion or music or sound or smell—nothing like the self’s detailed stories of
notes and words and shapes and colors.
We are the prisoners of time.
Up until modern times, all the arts
took the shape of stories, reflecting the triadic structure—beginning, middle,
and end—that Aristotle deemed necessary in order for art to be successful. In
our times, however, we have learned to make art without stories—non-narrative
art, or art that violates the triadic principle. We can see those experiments
most noticeably in contemporary painting and poetry. While never completely
non-narrative, they come close, as in the case of a poem or a painting that
attempts to imitate an emotional state, such as we see in Mark Rothko’s
paintings of bands of pure color.
We could say that Rothko’s colors
create an emotional state—death or loneliness or desire—but it would be more
accurate to say Rothko’s bands of progressive color somehow reflect (or
imitate) an emotional state already deep within us. That emotional state,
however, never exists on its own. When Rothko’s work brings up that remembered
state, it’s always intertwined with one or more of the countless stories that
make up our sense of who we are: Mary’s broken porch, That winter
afternoon. And those stories are attached to others. Our lives are
nothing more, nothing less, than an endless collection of stories we inherit,
create, retell, remember, and forget. Those endless concentric, intertwining
circles again. The depiction of the stories that make us up as circular
may seem strange to those who think of a story as a simple straight line:
beginning, middle, and end—a story with no ancestors and no children. Tribal
man, however, had a better grasp of the truth: we are composed of many
stories—each giving birth to another, and all of them constantly
wheeling through our consciousness as the stars wheel through the heavens. Some
are rising, some are falling. Some are dying, some are being born. Quite
simply, stories are the way we make sense of the world. We know no other way.
We are, in some very real sense, a menagerie of stories. And we are
never without them, because without them we would collapse. We would cease to
exist as humans. We would be like the terrifying theoretical case of the man
born without senses or memory. There is hardly a word dark enough for such a
condition, as Oliver Sacks has reminded us in The Man Who Mistook His Wife
For A Hat.
Stories
are at the heart of SOULSPEAK. Unless we appreciate their
essential grandeur and mystery and how they are interwoven into our very
nature, we may tend to dismiss them as being ordinary. Indeed, we may fall into
the same trap as that of much of contemporary literary thought: seeing
narrative as unsophisticated, old-fashioned. For me, however, stories
are at the very heart of who we are and how we express ourselves. They mirror
our lives. Like us, a story begins, moves through time, and ends. Then another
begins. Our lives are an endless cycle of stories that rise and fall within us
like waves in the ocean. Waves we sometimes allow to race beyond us onto the
shores of the world, where they eventually dissipate, leaving nothing but a
faint, momentary tracery of salt. What is even more beautiful about the stories
we call art is that they imitate the essential movement of the mystery we call
God. These collaborations of self and soul—these stories we call
art—imitate God’s story. Think of those wonderful Japanese prints of giant,
curling, finger-like waves made up of hundreds of little finger-like curls.
They say it so wonderfully: art is the little curl on the edge of the one great
curl.
Or
think of it another way: fractals. Fractals are mathematical, graphic
representations of one of the essential mysteries of nature: that larger
structures, such as snowflakes, are made up of smaller, identical snowflakes as
far down as we can see. When we look at the edge of a snowflake closely, we see
it is made up of an exact but smaller imitation of the larger flake. And when
we look at the edge of that smaller flake, we see an even smaller imitation of
it, and so on as far as we can see. Those endless, concentric, intertwining circles
again. When we begin to see the stories we call art in these terms (terms, by
the way, that would make perfect sense to tribal man, who thought only in
stories) we can see how incredibly sensitive tribal man was to the mystery that
dominates our lives. We can also see why art dominated his life. It was the way
he celebrated the mystery of life. Everything else was a waste of time.
It never occurred to him to do anything else. And of all the art forms
practiced by tribal man, speaking from the soul, or tribal poetry, was
the essential art form he used to imitate and celebrate the mystery of
creation and destruction.
Even
though sound is the first sense we use (babies move to sound in the womb) and
the last to leave us (I heard a fly buzz when I died), we pay more attention to
sight. It is the dominant sense in our literate, visually oriented culture.
Because of this, it may not be immediately clear to us why the art of speaking
had such a powerful influence upon tribal man. But once we realize that tribal
man lived in a world of sounds, it begins to make sense. Think about it. In a
dense forest, sound (more than sight) alerted tribal man to danger—told him
which animal was just beyond the trees. He not only imitated what animals
looked like, but even more what they sounded like. Sound, as Walter Ong has
pointed out in The Oral Tradition, was at the center of preliterate
life. Many creation stories, including an alternative translation of Genesis,
start off: In the beginning, the voices created heaven and earth.
It
should not surprise us then to find out that not only did a tribal speaking celebrate
God’s story, but it also imitated the sound of God speaking. Because
what we hear in a speaking is not just a story composed of words, but
the sound of the soul speaking. This may seem a mouthful to some, but it
goes to the heart of this book. If you were able to relax and really listen to
The Prisoner of Time on the CD, you should have heard something of what
tribal man heard. Because what you hear in SOULSPEAK (which is a
contemporary version of a tribal speaking) is not only the story—the words—but
the sound of beauty and the sound of truth. It is precisely
this—the sound—that gives SOULSPEAK much of its unique power. It is also
why I sometimes say SOULSPEAK is beyond poetry as we know it today.
Because contemporary poetry, even if it is spoken out, is created by the
solitary act of writing, not communal speaking. They are two different
beasts, and their effects are quite different.
Seeing
art as portrayals of the soul’s stories also allows us to see that the
labyrinthine novels of Kafka are, in intent, identical to the startling, yellow
bird-masks of New Guinea tribesmen. They are portrayals, or imitations, of the
soul’s stories, but in different human terms. We all know that those terms are
determined by the times and culture of the artist. But in the case of
preliterate man, the terms are also determined by the nature of the self.
Something happened with the advent of writing that changed the nature of the self
forever, and we have to take that into account if we want to understand why
tribal art (and speaking from the soul), came so easily to tribal man.
It is tribal man that we have to learn from.
It would be easy to assume that the
fifteenth-century painter Michelangelo, the thirteenth-century painter Giotto,
and the self-decorating, preliterate tribesman had the same experience of self,
but that would be a mistake. Giotto and Michelangelo may have portrayed things
in different terms because they lived in different times, but they shared a
sense of self—a self much different from that of tribal man. That is why
Michelangelo’s use of dynamic movement and perspective may be the exact
opposite of Giotto’s flat, frontal way of looking at things, but we can still
easily recognize and appreciate their art as belonging to us. But this
is not so when we look at tribal art. It seems different from us. That
difference can be accounted for only if we recognize that tribal man had a
different sense of self. He lived closer to his soul. His
portrayals used a vocabulary closer to the soul than the self.
This closeness makes all the difference when it comes to speaking. If we
can find some way of simulating, or stimulating, or creating, that closeness,
of bringing the whale closer to the boat, we too can begin to speak
almost effortlessly.
5
The
Effect of Writing on Consciousness
“Speak,
Muse, and through me tell the story . . .”
Before I show you
how to bring the whale closer to the boat and speak, I want to take a side
trip into the consciousness of preliterate man. Much of what I’m going to say
has been gleaned from Julian Jaynes’ Origin Of Consciousness in the
Breakdown of the Bi-Cameral Mind. I first encountered Jaynes’ book in the
early stages of my attempts to create a spontaneous oral poetry. As I
progressed in oral composition, Jaynes’ book somehow appeared and opened all
the remaining doors. This book should be read by anyone interested in the
nature of poetry and the arts in preliterate times, as well as by anyone
interested in the true impact of writing on our culture.
It
is apparent to me (as an oral poet) that in our literate, technological world,
speech is often seen as a sloppy, unreliable version of the written (printed)
word. One might say this attitude first emerged when Moses came down from the
mountain with written commandments. It was a signal that things were about to
change. It was a signal that speech (the miracle that separated man from the
animals and allowed men to communicate with each other and the gods) was about
to lose its primacy to the act of writing—a product of the necessities of
trade. When Moses delivered a written contract to his people to assure them of
God’s intentions, it symbolized, among other things, the change from a wandering,
tribal culture to a more centralized one that was taking place throughout that
part of the world. But in another sense, and perhaps an unconscious one, it
intimated that the spoken word couldn’t be trusted. Even the spoken word of the
gods.
In
a related, inverse sense it also symbolizes our unconscious realization that we
were beginning to lose our ability to speak from the soul. Or as Jaynes
puts it, we were beginning to lose our ability to hear the gods correctly.
After all, the two acts are different phases of the same moon. We are reminded
of this relationship by Homer, our greatest preliterate poet (and to my mind
the greatest poet of any period), when he says, “Speak, Muse, and through me
tell the story of that man skilled in all ways of contending . . .” because
in that opening statement he is equating the act of speaking to the gods
speaking through him (i.e., of hearing the gods). Two sides of
the same moon. The invention of writing was going to have a huge effect on us.
In a very real sense, we were going to lose that moon, and get a paper one in
its place.
As
Jaynes intuited, the invention of writing brought about a very rapid change in
our consciousness—our sense of ourselves. That change is symbolized by another
biblical story—the story of our expulsion from the Garden of Eden into the
world of knowledge, of self-consciousness. It symbolized our expulsion into the
endless, forward-gazing, backward-looking, second-guessing world that grew
within us and that now occupies all of our anxious, waking days. When we
learned to write, we lost much of our ability to float in the sea of is,
the very same sea that gives us access to the soul—the very same sea
where the gods speak to us. This didn’t happen overnight. It took
centuries. This “leaving of Paradise” is still going on in remote parts of the
world: there are still some small, remnant cultures in the deep interior of
Africa and New Guinea that exist in a true tribal, preliterate state. And that
is where we want to go, if only symbolically, to learn more about how tribal
man spoke from the soul. To learn more, we are going to have to look at
preliterate poetry, because that is the distant ancestor of SOULSPEAK.
6
Preliterate
Poetry¾A
Primer
Preliterate
poetry is not literature, but an intensely human art.
Earlier, the focus
was on the visual art of preliterate tribal man because that is what has
survived. We are lucky to have that, because as we know by looking at
contemporary tribal art, most of it is fashioned from wood or bone or feathers,
not metal or rock. Preliterate man was not overly concerned with the historic
importance of his art. It was something he lived and died with, not something
he donated to museums for tax write-offs and subsequent eternal life in the
Metropolitan catalogs. While these ancient tribal pieces do provide an
important window into his world, they are not quite enough for our purposes.
But of the arts that were equally important to him, if not more so—his poetry
and music and dance—we have nothing. Well, almost nothing. The music and dance,
of course, are completely lost. But in the Western world, we do have the
translated, transcribed versions of preliterate poetry at its most developed.
It is no longer tribal poetry, but it is close enough in many respects to give
us a window. I am talking about David’s Psalms and Homer’s epics. Of
course, they are not quite what you would hear if David or Homer were around to
chant them, but they give us some idea of what that poetry was like.
There is a short but
detailed exposition of the nature of ancient preliterate poetry in the latter
half of this book. Despite some scholars’ (and poets’) ideas of how that poetry
was composed and how it sounded, there is no doubt in my mind that the poems
were chanted spontaneously, without premeditation, to slow rhythmic music and
that they were responded to in the same manner. Only lately are scholars (and
poets) beginning to understand the communal (speaker/responder) nature of all
oral poetry. This is because they have tended to interpret and describe it
based on the only poetry they really know: written poetry. Except for its
impulse and result, however, written poetry is a completely different poetry,
being single-voiced and written in private, without music. One is an oral/aural
art designed for the ear and one is a written/visual art designed for the eye.
This
is an important distinction. Especially so since one of our objectives is to
use ancient oral poetry as a means of bringing you into a contemporary version
of it called SOULSPEAK. Being a poet who creates poems in both the
written and oral mode, the scholarship on preliterate poetry makes me wince at
times, much as an athlete might wince at a sportswriter’s description of a
game. For example, my assertion that listeners responded to David and Homer
will make many scholars and poets leap up in objection. Yet these were public
poems spoken to others. One has only to actually practice the art or visit a
black church to see the truth of this assertion. After all, African-American
churches are a visible, true remnant of a once-vibrant tribal culture. In fact,
what takes place at black churches is close in spirit to what took place when
David and Homer chanted their poetry. And don’t forget that Phemios, Homer’s
alter-ego in the Odyssey, is chanting his songs in the midst of the
continual gaming and whoring and drinking of the suitors, hardly the
counterpart of a reading at the American Academy of Poets.
Preliterate
poetry is not literature, but an intensely human art. Another indication of how
bound oral scholarship can sometimes be to the act of writing is seen in the
fact that scholars have never developed a good term for preliterate poetry that
corresponds to the term “literature” for written poetry. But if they had
actually practiced the art, the term “speakings” would probably come to
mind, because that is how it feels to both speaker and listener. Not
“talkings,” or “oralture,” but speakings. The term intimates that something
extraordinary is happening—something that separates it from ordinary talk. The
term speakings also emphasizes the often-disregarded fact that
preliterate poetry sounded like speech. It might have been chanted, and
employed certain idioms from time to time, but the syntax and structure were
identical to speech. One has only to read a strict translation of Homer to see
this. Indeed, it can’t be any other way, because, in essence, we can only
spontaneously speak in one way: the way we speak to each other, in stories.
There is, however, a major difference between speaking and everyday
speech. Speakings come from a deeper level than our normal speech. That
is what distinguishes it from our everyday speech. Poetic speech is ordinary
speech in structure. Its authority is internally generated. It has a cadence—an
authority—we instantly recognize, because what we hear in a speaking is
the sound of the soul speaking rather than the self. That is the
authority we hear. Everyone knows the difference once they’ve heard it. Or,
more to the point, spoken it.
Now
let’s take a closer look at tribal poetry. We have seen that tribal man had a
poetic, unpremeditated speech (like ordinary speech). It had the same syntax
and structure as ordinary speech, but was cadenced and spoken to rhythmic
music. And it was responded to in the same manner. Cadence is nowadays
understood as any one of a number of metrical schemes the poet can adopt to
give rhythm to his writing. But the cadence of a speaking comes from an
internal source—from the soul, our very deepest self—not from
some book on metrics. The soul (or as Jaynes would have it, the right
brain) speaks in cadence. It is a cadence over which the poet has no
control—a cadence that establishes, in part, the authority we hear in a speaking.
It is my belief that this cadence—though coming from a deep internal source—is
shaded by the language being spoken. Jaynes, on the other hand, believes that
the cadence consists of dactyls (a stressed sound followed by two unstressed
sounds, e.g. “higgledy, piggledy”) regardless of the language, and cites
Homer’s work and the apparent rhythm of speaking in tongues as evidence. Well,
maybe he’s right, and maybe he’s not. What is important is the realization that
the cadence is internally generated. And powerful.
But what does all this have to do
with SOULSPEAK? Everything. Because the poetry just described is an
exact description of SOULSPEAK. Well, almost. Because I haven’t told you
what that ordinary speech consisted of: Stories. Only stories. The soul
only speaks in stories.
God only speaks in time.
All
preliterate poetry consisted of stories—sometimes very long, sometimes very
short (as in the case of refrains), but stories nevertheless. We dream in
stories, so why should the soul speak any differently when we’re awake? If the
simple beauty of this isn’t immediately apparent, it may be because the task
seems too complex. You’re probably saying to yourself: not only do I have to speak
(in cadence) to rhythmic music, and to a responder, but I also have to make up
a spontaneous story at the same time. Now how in hell am I going to do that?
Well, the answer is, relax, you don’t have to do anything. Your body will
do it for you. With a little help from the soul, which is never far from the body.
I
believe the body contains an instinctual memory of the mindset of tribal
man, especially with regard to the art of speaking. Tribal man was just
like us but not quite. “Not quite” because he had a very quiet consciousness by
our standards—there was very little separating his surface self from his
deepest self, or soul. The whale was just beneath the boat all
the time. This conscious state could be likened to a state of meditation, or as
Jaynes suggests, the semi-hypnotic state that sometimes occurs when you’re
driving on the freeway. You somehow make all the right logical, physical
decisions to get from point A to point B but have no idea or memory how you did
it. Amazing. Someone was driving, but not the conscious you that’s always so
busy controlling your every move (or so you’d like to think) by projecting your
future and second-guessing your past. By thinking. But as our freeway
trip just proved, you can go about your life completely tuned out to that busy
consciousness. That semi-hypnotic state is perhaps as close as we can come to
understanding how tribal man went about his life. In other words, it was all
done without the busy self-consciousness that drives our lives. Tribal man
simply didn’t have to contend with that kind of consciousness, he lived close
to his soul, and because of that, speaking came very easily to him. It
simply possessed him. And when it did, he spoke to the gods. In stories.
Just like you’re going to do when you learn how to move your whale beneath your
boat.
Citing the Psalms and Homer
as examples of late tribal poetry may be misleading. They are, but at its most
developed state. They occurred just before, or during, the period when writing
was invented. This was a time when tribal/feudal cultures were changing into
more centralized trading cultures. By that time, singular poets had started to
emerge—men with extraordinary gifts such as David and Homer. This is the
beginning of a court poetry, in which the communal, or antiphonal, nature of
tribal poetry began to change. Responses had an etiquette now—they were no
longer the spontaneous, passionate, soul-driven responses of early tribal man.
They were more mannered. They deferred to the leadership of the lead speaker.
At times they’d sound something like the responses in a contemporary black
church, and sometimes they’d be more like crowd responses at a hotly contested
ballgame. But they weren’t the organic, interwoven responses of early tribal
poetry, when both speaker and responding speaker had equal
weight.
Because of this, the poetry of David
or Homer is not quite the best model for SOULSPEAK. We want to go back
to the earliest state of poetic speech. We want to go back to the time when
everyone was a poet—when everyone participated in creating a speaking,
because that is the true Galapagos of poetry. It is there we can clearly see
the nature of oral, antiphonal poetry and use it to help us understand the
contemporary version called SOULSPEAK. One way to get back to that time
is to turn on the TV and trail along behind the latest National Geographic
camera crew filming a contemporary, preliterate tribe in Africa or South
America or New Guinea. Then all we have to do is wait until the tribe begins to
celebrate a victory or death or birth or drought or defeat or harvest. I say
celebrate because that is the exactly correct word. No matter how sad or joyous
the event, it was to be celebrated by the tribe, made into art in the
form of a story. There was to be a speaking. We sometimes forget
that tribal man was a constant artist. He was constantly celebrating the
mystery of creation and destruction. We, on the other hand, would only think of
celebrating the act of creation, or birth. We have thought our way into that
position. Tribal man was more artist than thinker. While he mourned and wept at
the death of a fellow tribesman, he instinctively understood that destruction
and creation are co-equal, inter-linked forces. This is why animals (and even
people) were sacrificed: to imitate the mystery of destruction and creation in
God’s story. It was a praise act. A celebration.
So here we are,
poised to watch a celebration, a speaking. But first, take a
quick side trip into early, tribal Greece, to see what the Greeks had to say
about all this. After all, we know the Greeks were very exact. The most ancient
word they had for what I call a speaking was “poein,” which
means, “to make.” That was their earliest word for poetry: to make. Not
make words, images, similes, metaphors, stanzas, stories, music, lines,
chanting, just: to make. What does this say to us, that this exasperatingly
exacting culture chose to be so concrete and simplistic in describing
the very art that dominated their lives? This root is archaic, and therefore
must describe poetry at a very early stage, the tribal stage, many hundreds if
not thousands of years before Homer. And that poetry was very similar (in
structure) to what we are about to see in our National Geographic TV special on
tribal life. What we are going to see is a poetry that is everything: music,
speech, costume, and movement. A celebration. And it’s going to take place all
at once.
What’s more, there are no specialists involved. Instead, each
tribe member is going to simultaneously incorporate several art forms into his speaking.
In this light then, we begin to see the aptness of the Greek root, poein.
The simplicity of the root refers, in part, to the fact that poetic speech, or
a speaking, seems to come out of us. It makes itself. But the root also
refers to the fact that there is no need to describe what in particular is
being made, because poetry at this stage is made of everything. It
is composed of every way in which we can express ourselves: speech, music,
dance, and costume. The arts had not yet separated into the seven Muses, a
separation that ultimately took place with the advent of writing. In this early
poetry, everyone expresses themselves through multiple, interconnected
portrayals of their souls. It is art at its most human and most potent.
Witnessing a true speaking,
we’re going to be a bit puzzled, perhaps dazzled. We won’t understand the
language, but we will detect a speaking, responding pattern. What we are
hearing is oral, antiphonal (“to return the sound”—again the Greeks were very
accurate about it) poetry. It is being chanted, or cadenced, to rhythmic drums
and/or simple wind/string instruments. But what is really strange to us is that
everyone seems to know what to say, and we immediately assume that everyone has
memorized their lines, like actors, through verbatim memory. But they haven’t.
There may be some phrases that are tribal clichés¾phrases
that have become so important and valued by the tribe that they are used over
and over. But everything else is unpremeditated improvisation, for both speakers
and responding speakers. This is also true for the music and movement
and costume. There is no centralized authority, no director dictating what
should take place.
What governs the celebration is an
unconscious agreement on what is to take place for a particular event, say the
death of a tribe member. But the agreement is constantly open to improvisation.
This is difficult for us to understand, with our regimented and scripted dramas
and ballets and operas and movies, but improvisational collaboration is at the
heart of tribal poetry. We immediately think that such freedom would lead to
chaos, but we have to remember that these cultures moved very, very slowly. And
so did the act of improvisation. If anything, it was prompted by a change in
the group soul, because we also have to understand that there are no
individuals in the tribe, only members. Consensus thinking and feeling were the
prized attributes. Individuality, as we know it today, was a menace and quickly
eliminated. It’s equally important to realize that these improvisations took
place in the midst of performance and were quickly adopted or denied on the
spot. No thinking was involved. The improvisation simply rose up from
the shared, emotional mainstream of the celebration like a
backward-moving wave in a rapid stream.
There were no scripts for this
poetry. But how, then, do twenty tribe members respond identically to something
the lead speaker(s) has just improvised? There are several answers, the
first being that the response was most often an echo. The second is that there
were often lead responding speakers, tribe members others looked up to
because of the power of their responses. These leaders would, from time to
time, improvise a response that was immediately picked up and echoed by the
others. The third answer is that the members knew what the response should be
because of custom, i.e., they were responding to a cliché on the part of the
speaker. And the last answer is that the members sensed what the response
should be. After all, the role of antiphonal poetry is to unify the tribe, to
eliminate individuals, to reinforce everyone acting as one body, one thought,
one emotion. In a poetry like this, we are dealing with responses from a very
deep level, a soul level, a level where we are all ultimately connected. Our
problem is that our busy consciousness prevents us from getting through to that
level. But tribal man had no such problem. What seems a superhuman occurrence
to us was an everyday event to tribal man.
7
SOULSPEAK
as a Participatory Art
Everyone’s
in prison, but no one knows it. That’s the problem.
What does it feel
like emotionally (and physically) when you create your own speakings?
It’s going to feel something like a small orgasm—like a birth—as the soul
rises up through the body and emerges into the world as a story. You
will experience this story as beautiful and true—physically and emotionally.
This is because you have allowed the soul to display its truth—a truth
like no other. The soul is not trying to prove anything. Rather
its truth comes from a display of opposites—yin and yang—of what it means to be
human. The soul’s display is a fractal of God’s display.
There
is no answer as to why we find the soul’s display to be true and
beautiful, just as there is no answer as to why we find the mind’s truth
(which is a display of logic) to be true and beautiful. The mind’s
truth, however, is but a shadow of the soul’s truth. It is a thin truth,
despite the fact that it fuels our modern civilization, much as the soul’s
truth fueled preliterate cultures.
Somehow
or other, in our modern times, the soul’s truth has been all but discarded. We
consider it useless, or at best frivolous. We want something that will fuel our
technological society at any expense. Even at the expense of our own lives. As
a poet who works with children, most often children at-risk, and who often
depends on outside funding to carry on that work, I can’t tell you how
appalling it is to be asked to prove that practicing SOULSPEAK (or any
art) can improve the lives of these children. And this is by concerned,
well-meaning people. At times I find myself thinking: are these people crazy?
Don’t they understand that by allowing the soul to display itself, we become
truly human? The answer, of course, is No and Yes: No, they’re not
crazy, and Yes, they don’t understand. The real problem is
that these well-meaning people have been brought up in a dim cave, a cave of
technology and reason. They find the cave well lit and extremely comfortable,
even if they do have excruciating nightmares. This is what happens to us when
we are deprived of the experience and practice of art. We become like those
confined in prisons: we adjust to it, become less human. We even learn to enjoy
it.
As
a society, we have become satisfied with being less than human, and often
without even knowing it has happened to us. Many of us don’t have the slightest
idea that another life exists outside of the one we are living—a life made
luminous by art. Because of this, we have to endure the grotesque spectacle of
leaders at every level proudly telling us they’ve achieved everything they’ve
ever wanted (and that we should want) without really being involved in the
arts. What we need is more industry, rotary clubs, thrift, wealth-building,
economic partnerships. More dim lights for the dim room. The Greeks, by the
way, were pretty mean penny counters themselves, but they had no such delusions
about the role of art. To the Greeks, art was as necessary and beautiful as
breathing. Not to partake in art would be less than human.
How have we allowed
this to happen? It is ironic that here in America, a land bursting with wealth
and leisure time¾two
crucial elements necessary for the creation of art, or so anthropologists tell
us¾we should be
so barren of art’s benefits. (How anthropologists explain the caves at Lascaux,
which hardly bespeak either wealth or leisure, I have no idea.) Perhaps this
inability to explain Lascaux may be due to the fact that we no longer see art
as a human activity—a participatory act—but only as an act practiced by
specialists. Specialists we passively observe. Specialists we have the time and
money to see. But that is a very narrow view of art. Yet, even if it is a very
narrow view of art, we are creating it at a frantic pace. One has only to turn
on the television and radio and experience the gigantic collaborations we call
movies and pop music to realize that “art” is being created on a scale greater
than ever before. A scale that dwarfs anything the Greeks and Romans and
Egyptians produced, even on a per capita basis. But is it equal to or better
than their art? Sometimes, but not very often, because it is an art created by
vast collaborations of economic and artistic interests, and the economic part
of it wants to make money. Not live reasonably well, but make money. Profit.
Big bucks.
It is the “make
money” aspect that is the worm in the apple, because corporate art—art
directed by large institutions—is nothing new. After all we can see corporate
art in the ancient ruins of Dynastic Egypt. But it was art for purposes of
displaying the soul, even if it was also used as a massive display of power.
Dynastic Egyptian art may be too uniform, conforming to too many stylistic
restrictions, but it is still beautiful, and true. It is the key to truly
understanding what it meant to be alive in that time.
God
only speaks in time.
In
America we are feverishly creating an art meant to appeal to the greatest
number of purchasers (who, by the way, are all in prison but don’t know it). Is
it any wonder that this art is usually mediocre—nothing but simplistic
propaganda—something to keep the prisoners happy? After all, art reflects who
we are, how we see ourselves. This is not to say that the producers of art are
outside of the prison, pulling diabolical strings. They aren’t. They’re
in prison too. In fact, everyone’s in prison, but no one knows it. That’s the
problem.
The
problem of corporate art is a difficult one because it is so intimately
linked to our capitalist way of life. But it is really just an extension of
what has been happening since we emerged from a tribal, preliterate state.
Writing made it possible to pass elements of the art being created to those
skilled in performance so that they could re-create it. In tribal states, of
course, there were always some who were more skilled in certain aspects of the
all-consuming art called tribal poetry. But the idea of passing on something to
someone else for a future performance simply didn’t occur. You did it when you
felt it, was the attitude of tribal man. It is only after the invention
of writing that a mind space occurs in which the person creating art can see
(in his mind) that it can be passed on to others (through the act of writing)
for future re-creation. But the true value of that re-creation lies in the fact
that it can be directed at something entirely new: an audience.
Audiences
came into being as tribal cultures emerged into division-of-labor cultures. As
that change took place, it was only a matter of time before artistic
collaborations designed for passive audiences began to occur. Dramatic theater
is an example of a very early collaboration. It is first seen in the Greek
culture three or four hundred years after Homer. In European culture, symphony,
opera, and ballet are examples of early, large collaborations. Today, we have
reached the stage of gigantic collaborations, movies being the prime form. It
is the logical outgrowth of what occurs when we become literate, commercial
cultures: art changes from something spontaneously created by individuals—from
a participatory art—into something created for a passive audience.
Collaborative art
makes it possible to create art of a high order. That collaboration is often
superior to what can be achieved individually. Early tribal poetry, for
example, was a powerful, spontaneous collaboration that displayed the group
soul, something of immense power and beauty. What separates tribal
collaborations from our modern collaborations (outside of the methodologies
employed) is that modern collaborations are intended for a passive audience. It
is an art form that occurs once a tribal culture develops into a culture where
there is division of labor. Quite simply, there’s less time for art. Goods have
to be produced and sold. Records kept. Then the art can be done. By comparison,
in tribal cultures, art was done all the time. There was no separate time for
art. What’s more, everyone participated. Thus, in almost every way, our
immensely passive twenty-first century art forms are the direct opposite of
what took place in tribal times.
Well,
what’s so bad about that you might say: I love watching La Boheme on TV.
And so do I. That’s not the problem. The problem is twofold. One is the
diminishing number of La Bohemes on TV, and I take that opera only as an
example of good art, art that reflects the soul. The other problem with corporate
art is that (in today’s interlinked world) it not only determines the
quality of the collaboration, but also the channels of distribution, which
is perhaps the more critical of the two problems. Good art, after all, is
always being produced somewhere. But if you can’t get to the art—to hear it, to
see it—it doesn’t matter how good it is. This is a critical problem for our
culture, and a very complicated one to solve, because corporate art is
woven into the very economic fabric of this country. Some hope the Internet
will offer a solution, and maybe it will. But the window it offers art may
eventually be co-opted and diminished by the same overwhelming cultural and
economic forces that are behind corporate art.
As
if it weren’t enough that we have become passive feeders at the trough of corporate
art, we have also forgotten that art is a human activity. It would be
difficult for most of us today to remember that just a hundred years ago, our
great grandparents were still gathering with neighbors to make art of some
kind. Sometimes it was original art, sometimes it was merely performing a
version of a song or dance, something they’d heard or seen. But they were
participating, even if it was merely telling stories to one another. This idea
of participation may seem startling to many. Are we supposed to make art? Isn’t
that what artists do? The answer is: to be human is to be an artist. Tribal man
understood this; somehow we have forgotten it. It is time to step back and
reclaim the artist within by rediscovering the so-called primitive art forms. SOULSPEAK
is one way to do this, but there are many others. Let me give you an example.
A visual artist with whom I often
collaborate makes collages. The collage form is very close to the tribal art
forms of costume (mask, body paint, dress) in that they both work primarily
with arranged found objects. Forget about the fact that some come from
magazines and some from the feathers of birds. They’re still found and
rearranged to suit the mood of the artist. This collage artist told me of her
work with advanced Alzheimer patients. In this project, she patiently shows
them pictures and words until they signal her (through eye contact or pointing)
that they like one of them. She then positions the word or picture on a board
until they signal her that the position is one they like. This process
continues until the collage is created. In talking to her about this, she told
me that their emotional and physical health seemed to improve as a result of
their collages. But she couldn’t quite explain it as the result of making art,
because in their deteriorated condition she couldn’t quite bring herself to say
they were actually creating art.
She told me she thought their
improvement was due to the fact that the visual/spatial activity was somehow
exciting their right brain, and therefore their entire nervous system. That may
well be, but I asked her to think about the fact that everyone can be an artist
given the right “primitive” forms. And that creating a collage was extremely
“primitive” in the way it worked. I asked her to consider that somehow the need
to create—to display the soul—is so strong within us that it worked its way
through all that faulty mental machinery. I suggested to her that the resultant
truth and beauty of the collage was what was enlivening the patient, not
just some random nerve excitement. You might think about this as well: that the
need to display the soul through art is as strong and as necessary as food and
sex and that if we don’t fulfill that need we will die a nice slow death and
never really know it.
Part
II
8
The
Communal Nature of SOULSPEAK
SOULSPEAK
is a poetry of soulsharing, of empathy, of communal celebration.
One of the major
themes of this book is that tribal art was a human activity, and that
contemporary versions of that art, like SOULSPEAK, allow us to reclaim
that communal part of our heritage.
First
we need a partner, at least one. The most natural partner for SOULSPEAK
is your current partner: husband, wife, boyfriend, girlfriend, best friend,
mother, father, lover, daughter, son, grandmother, grandfather. It’s the person
you most like to be with—that you are most comfortable with. This is because
you want to practice SOULSPEAK with someone who is a soul mate in every
sense of the word. It’s about as close as you’re going to get (in this day and
age) to a fellow tribe member. SOULSPEAK is a poetry of soul sharing, a
poetry of empathy, of communal celebration.
Now
is the time to listen to the speakings on the CD. It is the only way to
reawaken your body to the art of speaking. The art of SOULSPEAK
will seem like just so many words until you begin to absorb it by listening to
it. Play all the tracks that contain speakings as you would play music:
in the car, cleaning, walking. It doesn’t have to be a big event. Just play
them as background. Your body will get the message.
You
also have to prepare yourself for the fact that speaking is much easier
when done with a partner. To attempt it alone is to choose a more difficult and
less fruitful path. Creating poetry with someone else may go against everything
you know about poetry, but this is a different poetry¾a very human
poetry that wants to be done with others. This you will only
understand after you have created a speaking with a partner. It will be
an awakening.
SOULSPEAK
is a communal poetry that (in its essential form) has no passive audience. The
participants are the audience. The only people who need be present are those
actively participating. No observers, at least at this point. This means that SOULSPEAK
should be done in the same way that tribal man did it, as a communal celebration
of the mystery of life—as a way of speaking to the gods. Approach SOULSPEAK
as a celebration of the mystery of who you really are. Don’t think of it
as an academic or therapeutic exercise, both of which are deadly to art. Think
of David dancing wildly before the Ark of the Covenant, the most sacred “Holy
of Holies.” Or of Ray Charles at his most inspired. Either will do. Similarly,
when asked to consider SOULSPEAK as “a way of speaking to the gods” or
as Homer would have it, to the god within you (“I am one who can sing before
you as to a god.”), abandon all the ways you hide from yourself. After all,
you can’t hide from the gods. This is a time for speaking. Not a
time for hiding.
If
you still feel you’re not quite ready to speak with your partner, play
the CD section called First Speakings. They’re by
people of all ages and backgrounds—just like you. Listen to them. Play them
while you’re walking around the house—while you’re driving. Don’t worry if you
don’t get every word, they’ll find their way to you eventually. When you feel
ripe, you’re ready to do your first speaking.
9
SOULSPEAK
as a Journey
I
was in the wrong skin, but didn’t know what the right skin was.
When people describe
their first speaking with a partner, it’s usually something to the
effect that it felt powerful, or strange, or deep, but good. And that it just
seemed to happen, of its own accord. There is a sense of awe in their eyes. A
couple once said to me that it felt as if they were both giving birth to the same
entity. This communal creation of many voices and yet one is SOULSPEAK
in its most natural and most potent form. It is the form you should always
strive to achieve if circumstances allow it. This may seem strange, but it is
the way the body wants to speak: with others. In either case, you
quickly become aware that speakings, by their nature, are physical as
well as spiritual events. You can feel the body allowing the soul to
take form. It is a primordial experience and one that leaves us in a state of
wonder. That sense of wonder often leads to an awakening.
Sometimes
that awakening is announced by no more than a whisper. Sometimes it can be
quite forceful. In either case, a door will open. You can choose to walk
through it or turn away. If you walk through it, you will begin a journey.
Where that journey will take you no one can say, but it will be uniquely yours
and it will be filled with moments that will feel beautiful and true.
That journey will be filled with moments when the body will stop, and
turn towards the sun, or the moon, and allow the soul to speak, to
display itself. This may seem a strange journey, as many of our writings on the
soul advise an inward journey, often a solitary one. What I am suggesting,
however, is that there is an alternative direction, and that is allowing the
soul to display itself outwards, communally, through art.
It
is always difficult to say where journeys begin. We think we know, but as our
journeys progress, we become less sure. In my own case, I find it more and more
difficult to say where SOULSPEAK began for me. If you were to ask me
today, I would tell you it seems to have begun long before I came into this
world. I would tell you today that it feels as if something very ancient,
something not of this time, a presence, is working its way out through me. And
though it is not of this time, it is a presence that most definitely wants to
be here, on this earth. It is a presence that is very persistent in its desire
to speak. It is a presence that keeps telling me we have become
lost—that we have forgotten who we really are. But it is also a presence
that keeps telling me we can find ourselves. Knowing who we really are
can be accomplished through an art that is truly within us, sleeping, waiting
to be awakened. That art, the art to which I have been led, and to which I am
leading you, is SOULSPEAK.
That
is a large claim to make for any art form. There are undoubtedly others, but SOULSPEAK
is the only one that has made itself visible to me. That visibility, by the
way, came in stages, and is still occurring. When I tell you that I am
continually unsure where my journey began with SOULSPEAK, I can also
tell you, without reservation, that I have absolutely no idea where it is
taking me, or why. All I know is I am doing what I should be doing: the world
is leaning with me. It is equally clear to me that coming face to face
with an art form as primal as SOULSPEAK can’t help but affect you in
some fundamental way. It has affected my life and the lives of the poets I work
with, but it has also affected many ordinary people, of all ages, who have
taken it up. It becomes a way of life. This may not be immediately apparent at
first, but at some stage, SOULSPEAK becomes as necessary and as
beautiful as breathing.
Perhaps
the only way to prepare you for the journey you may take is to describe my own
journey as best I can. Not that my journey is especially significant. It may
interest some and not others. The impact speaking had on my life and
work is significant, however. What impact it will have on your own life
is hard to predict.
If
you are but a casual reader of this book, with no interest in actually trying
to speak, the art of speaking will have little or no impact on
you. But if you succeed in creating a speaking and continue to do so,
even on an intermittent basis, it will probably alter your life in an important
way. This is because speaking is the most profound, elemental, human way
we have of communicating. Simply by learning the art you will have shown a
desire to communicate on the level of the soul. You will have displayed your
soul to others, through art. The truth of that display is beautiful and makes
us less alone. It says to us: This is what it means to be human. When an art
like SOULSPEAK enters your life, your life has to change—if for no other
reason than you have found a way (that is already within you) of touching
others with the soul’s truth. That act is beautiful and healing to both speaker
and listener. Where speaking will take you is up to the gods, but it
will take you somewhere.
The Journey Begins
Something in me
said, “Keep doing it this way.”
As
for my own journey, I’ll have to start somewhere we both can recognize, so I’ll
start with my decision some twenty odd years ago to sell my half of a computer
company I had started. Although the company was prosperous, my partner had
become unbearable. I wanted out. That world held no more interest for me:
whatever skills I had in that area had long ago been exhausted. It wasn’t
really a life for me. It never had been. Rather it was something I had stumbled
into, for better or worse, on my way to being a poet. I remained a poet, but
one who wrote very little poetry. In effect, I put my life on a shelf. When I
took it down some twenty years later it was unrecognizable.
As
to where I was going, and what I was going to do, I had no idea. I wound up in
Florida, in Sarasota, not really knowing why. Oh, I could have given you a lot
of reasons, but they would all be wrong. Then, one day, a poem came to me. It
was a celebration of my marriage to the woman who had helped me save my life.
It had been some time since I had written a poem, but I knew it was a poem, a
real one, not just words. A door opened. More poems followed. Years passed, but
very quickly. I felt like I was in one of those science fiction movies where
the hero goes through many physical changes in a matter of minutes. That’s how
fast the poems were changing. I held on for the ride. It was as if someone
inside me knew what they were doing. Someone who was very impatient. I was
getting published, receiving honors. I sensed the poems were good, I just
didn’t know how good. I approached a well-known poet my brother knew. He was
kind. He told me I could continue to be clever, or I could begin to take risks.
Emotional risks. I could begin to be a poet. I didn’t like that, but I knew it
was true, and I have always tried to honor the truth, no matter how painful. I
allowed myself to change. To become more open. The poems also changed, became
more real. I began to read my poems at poetry readings. They were good, but for
some reason, they still didn’t sound right. Not only that, they didn’t feel
like me. I felt uncomfortable. I was in the wrong skin, but didn’t know what
the right skin was.
I
went to a writer’s conference. I needed direction. On the way, in New York
City, a thief stole my car. It was recovered, the thief arrested. I was
immediately thrown into the labyrinth of the New York City Justice System. I
thought I’d never emerge with my car. I was going nuts. My son, a writer,
suggested I use it as material, in that offhand, patronizing way sons have. On
one of my endless subway rides back and forth to the Criminal Courts building,
a long poem began to simply wend its way out, a different poem. It was me,
talking. Almost without effort. I’ll give you a taste:
Stolen
Poems
For Dixon Toro,
who stole my very old maroon
Chevrolet in NYC. It was recovered,
and Dixon arrested, 6 days later
in the Pelham Gardens Motel
at 2 in the morning.
Two
years on Rikers, that’s
heavy
time Dixon.
You’re
going to get it too.
Glucksman
says so, he
showed
me your record.
Like
a bill of lading,
he
said.
Crack
probably,
that’s
what Glucksman thinks.
I
remember listening to him
in
the Criminal Court Building
nodding,
Yeh, crack. But it
wasn’t
crack Dixon,
it
was something else,
the
way I’d babied it,
that’s
what I think, the way
it
gleamed beneath the vapor
lights.
That deep maroon.
You
should’ve kept walking
Dixon,
punched a Porsche
instead,
got high for a week,
bought
earrings for Lydia,
plantanos for
her kids.
It
must have been the envelope.
The
way it lay there on
the
seat, crisp, like money.
Dixon,
listen, I know
you
read my manuscript,
my
twenty poems. I found
them
on the back seat floor.
With
the cans and wrappers.
And
then, Consuela. Ah yes,
Consuela.
Who lived downstairs.
Who
went to Hunter. Who did
the
books at Hector’s bar.
Who
smoldered. Who was unfuckable.
Who
was always reading,
who
couldn’t take her eyes
off
you, who liked your friend’s
poems,
who didn’t know
you
were thinking of leaving,
of
writing poetry, that
the
crack was killing you,
that
Justin was sleeping one
off,
that you had his car,
that
Lydia was not your wife,
that
her kids were driving you
crazy,
that you had always
wanted
her, and Yes,
Consuela,
that he would slide
down
your belly, his tongue
like
a swollen animal,
the
motel door open
and
the traffic streaming by
like
rifle tracers and you
moaning,
No, Dixon,
Dios, no, favor..
Listen,
Dixon, it wasn’t
the
poems. That they weren’t
yours,
that you used them
on
Consuela. I’ve done that,
maybe
worse. Everyone has.
It’s
what you didn’t do.
You
should have called, sent me
a
card, put a Personal
in
the News, told me some
were
shit, some made you shiver,
that
Consuela had unfolded
like
a wet flower,
that
she tasted like smoke,
like
a forest. You should’ve
told
me how it felt
Dixon,
lying there,
pressing
her nipples,
when
it all came down.
Somebody,
you should have
told
somebody, Dixon,
anybody:
the guy
across
the cell from you,
the
one the jailer just
brought
in, the bookish one
with
all those poems. Look
at
him. He’s on to you,
and
not amused. He can’t
believe
you’ve got the nerve
to
hit him up for cigarettes
then
flop down on your bunk
like
that, your arms outstretched,
and
tell him that you’re doing
time,
You swear to God,
Your
mother’s grave, for something
that
you didn’t do.
When I looked at the poem
afterwards, I realized why it had felt different from anything I had done. It
was an unabashedly narrative poem. It was me, telling a story. When I realized
that, something in me said, Keep doing it this way. I let the
storyteller loose. It didn’t matter to me that narrative poems were often held
in disfavor by my fellow poets. The poems felt right. They felt true. The skin
felt more correct. Around that same time, a series of pidgin monologues
suddenly burst out in the persona of an Australian aborigine, Eldred Van-Ooy.
The language was a Melanisian pidgin, called Tok Pisin, that I had been
drawn to for some unknown reason. Like a magnet. I began studying a Tok
Pisin phonetic dictionary prepared by linguists. Then, one day, I began
writing in a language that was only spoken. The poems came out of me as if I
were talking, or maybe it was the aborigine, Eldred. I couldn’t tell which.
I’ll let you judge. Here’s a sample:
Drimtaim (Dreamtime)
Baimbai
ol waitman i-singawt long mi: “Eldred.”
Eldred then became my name.
long
skul, em i-singawt: “Van-Ooy.”
Van-ooy at school.
Behain
mi go long haus, em i-singawt: “Abo.”
“Abo” when the day let out.
Yar
kam na go.
The years passed by.
Olsem
san. Olsem mun.
Like suns. Like moons.
Drimtaim
i-kam. Drimtaim i-go.
Dreamtime came. Dreamtime
went.
Na
ol waitman i-no tokim mi em i-saevi Drimtaim.
But no one spoke of dreams
to me.
Em
i-tokim nem bilong olkain samting.
They only spoke of naming
things,
Em
i-tokim: wan, tu, tri, wan, tu, tri, tasol.
And numbering.
Wantaim
long skul mi tokim drim bilong mi.
One day at school I spoke
of dreams.
Tisa
i-tokim mi olsem; “Mi nogat saevi.
The teacher asked
Yu tok Drimtaim long mi,
orait, Drimtaim i-stap olsem,
If dreamtime always stayed
the same,
Drimtaim i-no stap, olsem
de?”
Or changed, like day?
Mi tok: “Drimtaim i-stap
olsem de:
Dreamtime is the same as
day I said:
olsem
em yu, dispela tebal, dispela buk, dispela skul
Like you, this desk, this
book, this school,
olsem olgeta samting i-stap
hir
Like everything that waits
me here
olgeta taim mi wek long
dispela rum.
Each time i wake inside
this room.
There
was no doubt in my mind that something momentous was happening. I just didn’t
know what. It was as if something within me was trying to get out, speak on its
own terms. Oh, I had plenty of explanations, but they were all wrong. A year or
two later, on a visit to California, I became very restless. My father was on
my mind. He had died a few years before. We had been estranged. I was slowly
erasing him. I knew it was wrong, that I had to right it, bring him back. I
began to pace my motel room. I couldn’t be contained. I went outside and
started to walk on the grass next to the freeway. The noise was deafening. I
began to think about our lives. I opened my mouth and started to speak
to some imaginary listener about our life together. As I started to speak,
I had the sensation I had just entered a hotel with many rooms. I entered one
of them. I saw my father and myself. I was twelve. Whatever had happened then,
happened again. And as it did, I told the story. As soon as I finished, I
suddenly found myself in another room. A different time and place. I saw my
father and myself again. Whatever had happened then, happened again. And as it
did, I told the story. I went from room to room for over an hour and then it
stopped. It was one of the most wondrous and most powerful events of my life. I
knew I had created something unlike anything I had done before. Not only had I
honored my father, I had honored something in myself. I had opened a door to
something very deep within me, that’s how it felt.
At
the time, however, I didn’t really know what that door had led me to. All that
I knew is I could recreate that story whenever I wanted, simply by walking into
that imaginary hotel. The doors to each room would open all by themselves. It
would simply happen again. I told the story publicly twice and then I stopped
telling it. I had set things right. I sent a video of a performance to the poet
who had advised me to change. He told me something interesting, something I’d
sensed but hadn’t quite put into words. Or maybe I had. He told me there was a
cadence to the stories. Something like poetry, he said. I didn’t know it
then, but I had rediscovered the art of oral poetry. I was doing what Homer had
done thousands of years ago. It had just come out of me, without my knowing how
or what I was doing. I became more obsessed with speaking poetry. I
wanted my poetry to become more and more speech-like. I wanted to speak to
people, not at them. I founded a poetry theater where I could work with
musicians and actors and other poets interested in performance. I began
speaking my written poems to music, to create intertwined duets of the written
poetry of my own and others. But I was still writing my poems. Despite my
earlier experience with my father’s story, I hadn’t put the two together. I
hadn’t put the act of unpremeditated, narrative speaking together with
poetry. Then, one day, a series of short poems came to me that were very
mysterious. They were so speech-like, I immediately called them “Speakings,”
but I kept typing “Spaekings,” like old English. Here’s a
sample:
Third Spaeking (Speaking)
The men looked across the river at the women.
They wanted the women, but what they
really wanted was the part that flowered
when they touched it.
Some men wanted the part that flowered
to be colorless. The women refused.
These men became women.
Other men wanted the part that flowered
to be red. Like blood. When it wasn’t
red enough, they crushed the women
to make them bleed redder.
There
was no doubt in my mind that something was trying to get out. But again I had
no idea what. I just knew it was very old. SPAEKINGS. One thing,
however, struck me quite strongly: the poems were immediately memorable. I
could recreate them orally on the spot, just like I could my father’s story.
That just doesn’t happen, by the way, with written poetry. Which is why poets
have to read from a text, or memorize verbatim. I was very close to something,
but I still didn’t know what. That problem was solved one night at the theater
when I began rehearsing a poem I had written specifically for a talented but
irksome young trumpet player. After a few takes, he threw down the trumpet,
told me to change my poem, and wrote down some idiotic lines that ended the
session. Later that night, as I was walking, I realized what he was trying to tell
me: that the trumpet wasn’t like the guitar, that I had to riff to accommodate
the phrasing of the trumpet. The light went on: a refrain poem, short riffs.
The door opened wider. I started to actually create the poem by speaking it. It
was a refrain poem, a poem of tiny one-line stories with a repetitive hook. And
like the poems in Speakings, and my father’s story, it was instantly
memorable. It became a part of me. It went like this:
Think of the
loneliness of whales.
Think of the
loneliness of their journey.
Think of the
cavernous dark
They must travel
through
With nothing to
guide them
But the sound of
their own singing.
Think of the
loneliness of their mating,
The soft dark wall
of one
Brushing against
The soft dark wall
of the other.
And then think of my
loneliness,
Standing here,
singing this to you.
I
had walked though the looking glass. Poetry and my father’s story had come
together. I knew instinctively that I could create poems orally. I told my
partners in the theater that I’d discovered the key. I told them all you had to
do was wait for a poem to start to come to you and then speak it out as you
would a story. That was the key. Only stories. Like you were talking
to a friend. Spontaneously, without premeditation. It was a momentous evening.
If it sounds simple, it was and it wasn’t. What I didn’t realize was that we
would eventually have to forget everything we knew about written poetry, that
this was an oral/aural poetry with completely different aesthetics. What we
also didn’t know was that it was going to be a long hard journey, and with no
one to guide us—only the sporadic scholarship on preliterate poetry that I
eventually discovered. I didn’t know it at the time, but the form of oral
poetry that had come to me was the very earliest form of oral poetry, a simple
refrain that was improvised upon. Whatever was emerging in me was starting way
back. At the very beginning. Another indication of our going way back to the
beginning, although again it wasn’t clear to me at the time, was that for some
reason we began to respond to each other’s refrains. We didn’t know it then,
but antiphonal poetry (or communal poetry) is at the very heart of oral
poetry—its earliest expression. Later, as I studied the scholarship on oral
poetry, it became clear to me that our progress in oral poetry was
approximating the manner in which ancient oral poetry developed. As we began to
trust the act of unpremeditated, narrative speaking, we advanced from refrains
and responding to refrains to creating straight narrative. But we still found
ourselves wanting to respond to what was being said. We sensed the true
communal nature of oral poetry.
We
had no idea why except that it felt correct. And sounded right. We were
learning to trust our ears, not our eyes. And our instincts. We also began to
work with musicians in a different way. We found that oral poetry was so
flexible we could easily adjust the cadence of our speech to what was happening
in the music. Later we became so confident in the act of speaking we
were able to let the music take our speakings to places we never
imagined. After a number of years, it seemed as if we had accomplished what we
had set out to do: to create a more speech-like poetry that spoke to people,
not at them. It seemed to me that we had also created a poetry
that was more in step with our times, a poetry that created a true communion
between poet and audience. Someone gave it a name, but it really named itself:
SOULSPEAK. Well, the name was correct but we were completely wrong as to
what we had really done. We didn’t realize that, however, until we began to
perform SOULSPEAK.
10
My
Own Journey Continues
We
were essentially blind to the true nature of SOULSPEAK.
Well, when we first
performed SOULSPEAK for an audience, some people got it, and some people
didn’t. We didn’t really understand why. Speaking had always seemed to
us to be the most accessible, most generous form of poetry we had ever
encountered. It was meant for everyone. Why, then, wasn’t everyone getting it?
There could be lots of reasons, we told ourselves. It was totally new. It was
multi-voiced. It was too different. It was too deep for everyday audiences. It
was a poetry that required we be good performers and we weren’t all that great.
The list seemed endless. Needless to say, they were all good reasons, but they
weren’t the right ones. What’s more, to complicate matters, many poets disliked
it, almost sight unseen. We were astounded by their inflexibility. After a
while, it became clear to us that most poets wanted to hold on to what they
knew. It seemed as if they intuitively sensed the risks involved in speaking
and chose not to take them for as many reasons as they could think of. Perhaps
these poets would eventually catch up to us, but maybe they wouldn’t. At any
rate, there was no sense waiting. We knew we were creating a real poetry, even
if it was radically different. We also knew that our path was correct and there
was no turning back.
Over
a period of time, however, as we began to teach a specialized version of SOULSPEAK
to at-risk children, our success with the children made us wonder if SOULSPEAK
was really meant to be performed for a passive audience that knew nothing about
it. Maybe it was just too strange, too different. Our success with
children, however, was telling us that people would get it if they did
it first. We were finding that they could really hear SOULSPEAK
once they created a speaking themselves. Doors seemed to open of their
own accord. Thus, doing SOULSPEAK enabled one to truly hear SOULSPEAK—to
hear the multiple voices more easily, and also to hear its sound,
its peculiar beauty. This led us to wonder if the primary form SOULSPEAK
should take was not as a performing art, but one where everyone participated, a
true communion of souls, just like its ancient counterpart. This realization
didn’t occur immediately. To tell you the truth it took years. We were
essentially blind to the true nature of SOULSPEAK, namely, that it was
to be performed in the same manner as tribal poetry: no audience, only participants.
It could be performed for a passive audience, of course, but for a general
audience to truly “get” SOULSPEAK, we found it is much easier for them
if they have already created a speaking. You could see it in their eyes.
People got it after they did it.
All
this should have been apparent to us from our work with children. For some
reason, we simply ignored the fact that once the children created a speaking,
they took to SOULSPEAK immediately. At the time, we thought there was an
essential difference between the version of SOULSPEAK the children were
doing (which used seed words) and the SOULSPEAK we were doing, which
didn’t use seed words. But there wasn’t. The seed words were just catalysts. I
don’t know why we were so blind to it. Maybe it was a kind of snobbery, because
the only difference was the manner in which we brought the whale underneath the
boat. After years of speaking, the poems would just happen for us. The
whales were always underneath us. The children, of course, were a different matter.
They were complete strangers to SOULSPEAK. The use of catalysts had
allowed us to bring the children into the world of SOULSPEAK
immediately. We could have a group of twenty children doing spontaneous, oral
antiphonal poetry in a matter of minutes. And the poems weren’t nonsense. They
were profound. Everyone in the classroom knew it too. Nobody had to be told
that these were real poems. You could hear the gasps of recognition. Even from
kids who had refused to participate, who told us they hated poetry.
Sometimes
the poems were so deep that some teachers became concerned the children might
not be able to handle the emotions that were brought up. Until they realized
the children loved it. That’s because the children were way ahead of them. No
matter how dark, or sad, their speakings were, they were also incredibly
beautiful and healing. It felt good to do SOULSPEAK, that’s what the
children knew. Their bodies knew it. At this point, we realized that the
teachers had to be brought into the circle. While many of them were thankful
for what the process had done for their students, some seemed awed by its
power. The only solution was to have the teachers participate on an equal
level. This frightened many teachers at first, but like the children, they soon
learned that SOULSPEAK not only allowed them to say who they really
were, but it also felt good. No matter how dark or sad their speakings
were. Not only that, but their participation allowed the children to respect
them in a new and more profound way. And these were children with severe
emotional and anger management problems. Classroom discipline and respect was a
constant concern among the teachers. Yet they found that expressing their
emotions through SOULSPEAK only strengthened their authority. It gave them
a new kind of authority. A human authority. I called it “Oprah
Authority.” The teachers liked that. They knew immediately what I was talking
about.
We
finally realized what SOULSPEAK was all about after our therapeutic work
had expanded to such a degree that there was no ignoring the communal
environment in which it truly blossomed. People got it if they did it together.
That was the overwhelming evidence. We were working not only with hundreds of
at-risk children of every age and description, but also with hundreds of
adults: severe depressives and schizophrenics, sexually abused women,
recovering alcoholics, family groups. The results were so striking that it
became obvious that if we just created a true communal entity where SOULSPEAK
could blossom, it would. Just as it had for us. But we were poets. These were
ordinary people. That’s what was so overwhelming. In fact the results were so
impressive that the local educational channel created a series on SOULSPEAK
to educate anyone who was interested.
From
this point on it became clear to me that even though SOULSPEAK could be
performed for a passive audience, it was best if the audience had a working
knowledge of it. We saw, moreover, that SOULSPEAK was not really a
performing art as we know it today. Rather, like its ancient counterpart, it
was a true participatory art form that would allow anyone to display their
soul. We had also found out that no matter how defective or broken the mental
or emotional machinery of the participants, the urge of the soul to display
itself was so strong as to overcome all obstacles in its way. When a poet I
admire read one of my essays on SOULSPEAK and quipped back in a note:
“Ah, so the soul speaks English now!” I almost wrote back “The soul can do
anything it wants to.” But I never bothered. He’d get it eventually. Hopefully.
But the fact of the matter is the soul can do anything it wants
to. My experience with SOULSPEAK has shown me that. It’s just that we
never know how it’s going to do it. Or why. Or when. As someone once said,
readiness is all.
We
are the sound of God speaking.
And
we are most us when we are
standing
on the glittery edge
where
God is making us up and we
are
making ourselves up
at
the same time.
Part
III
Creating
a Speaking
11
Creating
a Speaking
The
problem is not the shape of the soul but the shape of the self.
To create a speaking,
we have to bring the whale beneath the boat. In order to do so, we’ll need a
catalyst. There are many types, but seed words are the catalysts we’ll use
first. Right now, what is more important is the shape of the boat. It
must be a hull shape that fits the rising whale perfectly. Thus, it should be
concave, not convex. This would be an odd-shaped boat by conventional
standards, but we have to remember what this boat is for: speaking.
After all, we have a very troublesome self that we’re asking to partner with
the soul. The problem is not the shape of the soul but the shape of the self.
Or more correctly, the shape of our much too busy consciousness, which at this
moment is trying to figure out what’s going on, how it can stay on top. This is
why I suggest you listen to the First Speakings track on the CD
before reading this chapter. I want you to forget your current shape and become
concave, a receiver, not a resister. This is for a number of reasons. First,
since SOULSPEAK is an oral art, I want your body to begin to
reawaken to the sound of the soul speaking by listening to it and
then imitating it. Mimesis, remember.
Second,
I want to wean you from the world of writing and the self-consciousness it
helps maintain. The act of writing produces a thing, a string of characters
that can be examined, second-guessed, manipulated, allowing our much-too-busy
self-consciousness the opportunity of feeding on itself. Just what we don’t
want. I want to deprive your consciousness of that opportunity so you can
create a spontaneous, unpremeditated speaking. This is absolutely
essential to success. To do that you stop hiding. In every way. Then
begin listening to the First Speakings tracks on the CD again. As
you do, begin leaning with them. Open yourself to the fact that your body
knows what to do. Allow yourself to get out of the way and let your body
tell a story. Open your mouth and celebrate your luminosity by telling
a story you know absolutely nothing about.
Just
before you open your mouth, however, there are a few things you must do. First,
remember that you’re going to tell a story, and you’re going to tell it exactly
as you would to a friend. This means you must forget everything you know about
poetry and poetic diction: rhyme, inversions, lines, meter, stanzas, everything.
Remember, this is a poetry you already know, and it has completely different
rules. Play the SOULSPEAK Music track on the CD. Put it on repeat,
so it will keep playing. Relax, listen to the music playing, and as it does,
lean over the side of the boat and chum the waters a bit. With seed words.
Whale bait, if you like. Your partner, with eyes closed, will act as an echo
and repeat everything you say, just like what you heard on the First
Speakings track on the CD. It may help if you and your partner also
listen to the Introduction to Responding track on the CD before
proceeding.
Here
are the seed words we’ll use as catalysts:
Mother
mountain
love
arms
window
cold
green
You
chum by looking at the seed words. Let your eyes wander over them until you
notice yourself looking at one of them more often than the others. Don’t be
self conscious about it, just do it. If one of them isn’t sticking out
slightly, look away quickly, then look back. Do it several times. The word your
eyes keep going back to is the one with the most mojo. Forget about the
others. And don’t get serious on me. Remember, this is a celebration. You
should be light-hearted, happy-go-lucky. Like a dare-devil. Just keep your eyes
on the mojo word, because you’re going to have a good time with it. The
time of your life, if you want to know the truth.
Start
out exactly as you’ve heard on the First Speaking track:
Sometimes in my dreams, I . . .
and then connect “I” to the mojo word. Don’t worry how,
or what words you’re going to use. Your body will take care of all
that. And don’t think. Just allow your body to say what it wants
and to visualize what’s taking place, exactly as it visualizes what’s
taking place when you gossip. Let your body go as far as it wants with
the mojo word. That may be one phrase, or two, or three. Then, when your
body pauses (because it doesn’t know where to go), let your eyes jump
immediately to another seed word in the list. Let your body use that new
word to advance the story. When your body pauses again, let your eyes
jump to another word and keep going until you’ve used up all the words or the
story simply stops. Either way, you’ll know when the speaking is
finished, becaus
e
your body will know. It will simply stop. Welcome to SOULSPEAK.
In
the event you became confused and didn’t quite enter the world of SOULSPEAK
as we had both expected, it may have been because you didn’t quite understand
what I meant by looking at a seed word and letting your body advance the
story with that word until it can’t go any further. Let me illustrate by
creating a simulated speaking in written form. I’ll indicate where my body
stopped speaking by an (*). The next phrase will be the result of my
scanning the seed word list until my eyes select another word (which I’ll italicize
so you can follow my progress). The mojo word I’m using for this speaking
will be “window,” as this is the one my eyes kept going back to. Don’t force
this operation of selection—don’t go crazy with your eyes. Let your body
select the word. The correct word is simply the one you’re drawn to, the one
that’s leaning with you. As always, I’ll start out with the incantation:
“Sometimes in my dreams, I . . .”
Mother
mountain
love
arms
window
cold
green
Sometimes in my
dreams,
I am a window.*
Love cannot
come through.*
I am cold to
the touch.*
I am green in
the morning light.*
My mother is
outside,
Trying to look
through me.*
She sees the mountain
of my impatience.*
No arms can
reach me.*
Love
cannot break through.*
Here is another one.
This time, the mojo word is MOUNTAIN:
Mother
mountain
love
arms
window
cold
green
Sometimes in my
dreams,
I am a mountain.
I am far above the
earth*
My mother is
somewhere in the valley.*
She is sitting by a window*
It is cold in
the valley.*
Everything green
has vanished.*
There is nothing but
snow.
She is holding her arms
out to me,
But there is too
much distance between us.*
Too much distance
for love to cross.*
Too much distance to
come down from the mountain.*
Here’s another one,
using GREEN as the mojo word:
Mother
mountain
love
arms
window
cold
green
Sometimes in my
dreams
I am in a green
place.
It is peaceful,
With only the sound
of birds.*
My arms are
at my sides.
I am unable to lift
them.*
Love is calling me
from the mountain.*
It is my mother.*
She is holding her arms
out to me*
I can feel a cold
wind blowing.*
Something in me
says, “shut the window,”
And I do.*
Now the wind is outside,
like my mother, waiting to come in.*
Waiting for me to
open the window.*
Waiting for me to
say I love you.*
These
speakings were all created exactly as you see them. There was no
editing, no going back, no thinking. I just let them happen. Although
not exceptional speakings, that’s not the important thing. The important
thing is to let yourself speak. How high you soar is up to the gods. The
only modifications I made to what you see were some spelling corrections (as I
try to write as quickly as the words come to me) and the creation of line
breaks at the place where a natural pause had occurred, so that you could get a
sense of my rhythm.
Although
these speakings were created by writing them, the oral form is the true
form, the one that invokes all the buried power present in your body. It
will provide the true channel for the soul to speak. When you create a speaking
by writing it, you must simulate the act of speaking, and like all
simulations it is never quite the real thing. The true, original channel to the
soul will not be opened, only partially opened. This is because you will
unconsciously invoke a whole series of attitudes associated with the act of
writing, and possibly, if you are a poet, a whole series of attitudes
associated with the act of writing poetry.
If
you wish to simulate a speaking by writing it, this problem can be
easily solved if you first create a series of speakings orally, because
oral composition invokes a completely different set of attitudes in creating a
poem. Oral creation bypasses all you know about writing and writing a poem.
Thus once you’ve orally created a poem, you’ll really know in your bones that
the creation of a poem can exist completely outside of the act of writing. Once
you’ve experienced that feeling, it’s much easier to temporarily let go of all
the attitudes associated with writing and writing poetry. This is what you have
to do if you want to write a speaking that accurately simulates
the act of oral creation. The only reason you would ever create a speaking
in written form is for the convenience of giving it to someone. The simulation
of a speaking is but a shadow of the real thing. It’s like kissing
someone through a sheet of paper.
12
Some
Additional Tips on Speaking
Remember,
this is a poetry of many voices.
My best advice at
this point is don’t go on to the next chapter until you’ve created an oral speaking
with a partner. Unless you do, the remainder of this section will be just
words. When you create your first true speaking, you’ll go through a
change. You’ll recover a lost part of yourself. It will be worth it, so relax,
and keep at it until you’ve finally achieved a speaking. You’ll know
when you have¾your
body will feel like it’s breaking into blossom.
If You’re Still
Having Problems Orally Creating . . .
• Try Writing One First
If
you’re still having difficulty creating a speaking orally after several
tries and would like to try writing one first, use “stream of consciousness.”
You’ll have to do without the support of a partner when you write. but that may
be the only way to get you over the hump.
Note:
It is best to abandon the written mode as soon as you have succeeded. If you
don’t, you’ll miss the boat.
To
create a simulated speaking through writing, forget everything you know
about poetry: no inversions, no elaborate diction, no rhymes, no line breaks,
no stanza breaks. Just let it happen as if you are talking to your best friend¾the one who
always understands you. No hiding. No thinking. Just let it go.
It will help if you are in as dark a room as possible.
• Read it Out Loud
When
you’ve finally experienced a speaking in this manner, read it out
loud. Record it if possible. If it doesn’t slip trippingly off the tongue, like
speech, lighten up and try again.
When
you think you have it, ask a friend to “echo respond” to your reading of the
poem. If you have simulated the patterns of speech, the responder should be
able to respond without stepping on your feet, as there are natural pauses in
speech that signal when to respond. After all, that’s what makes conversation
possible. If you’re still using the matrix of writing, however, to create your speaking,
the phrases will be much too long, the pauses non-existent or artificial, and
the responses won’t work. That means you haven’t surrendered to the immediacy
of speech, even simulated speech.
If
you are still hitting roadblocks at this point, you may find yourself saying
you simply can’t give up how you write. Nonsense. The real problem is
that you’re afraid to give up conscious control. You are still hiding. And
thinking. Trying to stay on top. You are at a crisis point consisting of
danger and opportunity¾more
afraid of life than hungry for it. Keep trying until you create a good
simulation, in writing, of a speaking. You’ll know when you do it. Now
let’s get on with producing a true, oral speaking.
If You’re Ready to
Orally Create . . .
• Study the Texts of the Speakings
in Chapter 11
Before
you attempt to create that first true, oral speaking, look at the texts
of the speakings printed in Chapter 11. Notice that the first speaking
consists of one phrase per seed word (except for the seed word “mother”). This
will most likely be the type of speaking you will create your first few
times. Most of the speakings on the First Speakings track
are like this.
Later
on, as you loosen up, you may find yourself creating two or three phrases per
seed word (see the second and third speaking examples). It will happen
all by itself, so don’t try to force it. Generally, the speaking will
close when you use the last seed word. It just happens. Sometimes, however, it
will close on the sixth or fifth seed word. You’ll know it. The speaking
will just stop and you’ll feel a sense of completion. If the speaking hasn’t
closed by the time you use up all the seed words, and it’s not headed toward a
closing all by itself, go back to the seed words and use them until the speaking
closes. When it closes, your body will simply stop and there will be an
emotional sense of completion.
• Visualization Helps
If
you let your body visualize what you are saying (much as you do when you create
a piece of gossip), that visualization helps to move the speaking
forward. If you visualize your mother at a window, you may next see her doing
something: waving, or screaming. That’s your next phrase. When your
visualization stops, search for a new seed word to move the story forward.
Continue the process until the speaking closes.
• Listen to First Speakings
Listen
to the First Speakings track to get your body in the
groove. Then turn on the SOULSPEAK Music track and create an oral
speaking with your partner.
Well, if the gods were with you, you
flew. If you didn’t, go back and try again. Relax. It may be uncomfortable for
you to relinquish control, but that’s the idea. If you already know what you’re
going to say, it isn’t poetry. If you want to make poetry, you have to let go.
If
when you create your first true speaking you don’t feel something like a
tiny, wild orgasm rising up inside you¾if
you don’t feel you’ve given birth to something beautiful and true¾some part of
you was still thinking. Don’t think. Feel. Imagine.
• Let Your Body do the Talking
Your
soul knows what it wants to say and your body knows how to say it.
Remember, a speaking is a celebration. Now go back, relax, and
start again. If you still feel self-conscious, you may have to create complete
privacy for yourself. Go to a room where no one can hear you. Dim the lights as
low as you can and still see the seed words.
• Find a Partner
If
you still don’t have a partner, look for one, even one who knows nothing of SOULSPEAK
other than the few things you’ve told them. Ask them to respond with simple
echoes, like those you’ve heard on the CD. Responding creates a bond. You’ll be
less alone¾stronger.
Remember, this is a poetry of many voices. It’s natural to be a little
nervous, by the way. Remember that the Chinese character for “crisis” is made
up of “danger and opportunity.” Take advantage of it.
• SOULSPEAK, a Communal Art
This
predicament of finding a partner at the right time, by the way, is one of the
reasons I resisted writing a book on SOULSPEAK for a long time. It is
best introduced orally, in a communal setting. In that environment, it’s easy
to bring people together and demonstrate how to create a multi-voiced speaking.
This is very important because working with a partner is the most powerful
form of SOULSPEAK. It is also the most natural form and the easiest to
learn. Speaking is by its very nature a communal art. You listen, then
imitate with a partner. You really don’t need any didactic teaching. You simply
have to experience it to learn it.
The
realities of contemporary life being what they are, however, a book will most
probably be the way most people will be introduced to SOULSPEAK. Because
of this your first oral speaking will most probably be solitary. But
there are ways to compensate for that. After you have created your first speaking,
you can partially experience what it’s like to work with a partner by simply
finding someone you’re at ease with. Sit down with your partner (who may know
absolutely nothing about SOULSPEAK) and tell them you want them to
respond every time you say something. Tell them you’re going to create an oral
poem that requires a responder, and it will be fun (which is what art is by the
way—divine fun). Then play Introduction to Responding on the CD.
As you’ll see, the very first responses are simply echoes (or partial echoes)
of the main speaker. As the CD indicates, something will eventually come up
which is not a direct echo. The responder’s body will know how to do it.
No thinking, please. When you’re both ready to go, play the SOULSPEAK
Music track on the CD.
If
your new partner enjoys the act of responding, you should be able to continue
for as long as you want. “But,” you might ask, “How can I do that? Don’t I need
some new seed words?” No. Just pick a different starting word—a different mojo
word. Once you do, you’re ready to create another speaking. As you’ll
see, if you don’t think, you’ll create a completely new speaking.
You can repeat this process for as long as the words interest you. In fact, you
may find that when you go back after a while, and use the exact same starting
word, the speaking will be completely different. After all, time has
passed. You’re no longer who you were thirty minutes ago.
We
are the prisoners of time.
Take advantage of
it.
13
Speaking
and Responding
What
you will hear is the sound of the soul speaking.
You’ve now
progressed to where you can create speakings orally and with a responding
partner, at least in echo mode. Perhaps you’re also recording some of your speakings.
What you want to do now is more fully engage your responding partner. This is
because the responder must also speak to create a true communal speaking.
Asking your partner to respond by echoing is a start, but at some point you
want the responder to begin to reply spontaneously—to say whatever comes into
their heads (without thinking). The best way to do this is to listen to
the Introduction to Responding tracks and the First
Speakings tracks on the CD. Don’t try to figure out the responses
(there is no figuring them out in the conventional sense). Just catch the
spirit. You will quickly sense that the antiphonal part of a speaking is
only as powerful as the spontaneous empathy of the responder. You will also
find that you and your responding partner are creating something beautiful
without really knowing how you are doing it. What’s more, it will become clear
to you that the joint speaking is a fugue, and that there is no main
melody, there are just simultaneous melodies that support and feed each other.
This feeding is not done in a
conventional sense by listening and then responding as we do in our everyday
conversation (although there is always that element at work in SOULSPEAK),
because both partners are speaking to an imaginary listener, not each
other. I have come to the conclusion that there are various levels of
responding we are capable of, just as there are many levels of listening.
Many of them can’t take place in normal conversation, they can only take place
in art. And after all, SOULSPEAK is an art form, not everyday
conversation. Thus what takes place in SOULSPEAK is not speaking and
responding in the conventional sense. Rather, both parties are jointly
addressing a third, imagined party and if you give it free rein, you will
create what amounts to simultaneous speakings, like a second story that
is being formed by the responding speaker in a way that is almost
inexplicable. You will hear examples of that on the CD track called Many
Voices. When you reach that level of responding, the speakings
somehow fit together like the light and dark side of the moon, and in so doing
they display the full world of the soul. This normally takes place with two
people, but I have done it with three, and, like operatic groups, this could
probably be pushed to four or five.
All you need are compatible spirits.
At some point the person you have asked to be a responder will become a speaker,
because there is no difference once you get down to it. Not only are the roles
interchangeable, they may even change within a particular speaking.
Switching roles between main speaker and responding speaker is
one of the joys of SOULSPEAK. In my experience, whoever feels stronger
at the moment generally starts out as main speaker, with the responding
speaker being more passive. But as in sex, this power relationship can
change quite often. It just happens. And the result is a speaking of
extraordinary tones and shadings. One last thing should be said about partners.
They should be players—generous and courageous, willing to take risks.
Look for people who want to partner—who instinctively understand the rules of
partnering. They should be people who had friends when they were kids. Not a lot
necessarily, but enough. This is not to say your partners can’t be
idiosyncratic or have strong opinions about their art. After all, the worst
thing is a wishy-washy partner. What is required is someone who understands
that communal art is not the same as solitary art—you have to skinny down to
accommodate the others. They have to be people who like to play in the same
sense that children like to play. We don’t want those kids who wanted it all their
way in the sandbox. They never change their ways, believe me. I think this is
important to understand when you approach a communal art like SOULSPEAK,
because in the right atmosphere of trust and play, a simultaneous multi-voiced speaking
will happen. Just like that.
14
Expanding
SOULSPEAK
There
is really no end to the shapes SOULSPEAK can take.
If the gods were
with you, your first speaking allowed you to enter a world in which you
briefly became aware of the genius within you—of who you really are. As
simple as SOULSPEAK is, however, there are a number of things you should
know for a more complete understanding of its potential. One of the things you
should be aware of is the kind of catalysts that can help you achieve your speakings.
Seed words are the most common, but visual and musical stimulation are also
quite powerful. These catalysts stimulate the right brain, the hemisphere of
synthesis. Jaynes believes that preliterate poets created poetry in their right
brain, not only because it was chanted in a musical way, but also because that
was the way preliterate man heard the gods: “ Speak Muse, and through me
tell the story of that man. . . .” Today, that hemisphere, while it
still has the potential of creating words, has become dormant in that capacity,
with the left-brain usually controlling all word formation. Nevertheless, I
have found that the more right-brain stimulation you can achieve, the greater
your chances of success with SOULSPEAK. After a while, though, you may
not require catalysts at all. Once you’ve listened to some speakings on
the CD and created a few yourself using seed words, you may ju
st take off. Don’t
be surprised. It happens.
External
catalysts are useful but not absolutely necessary. Equally important is the
hull shape of the boat. Receptivity is also a catalyst (albeit an internal
one) and the most powerful way of increasing your receptivity is to speak
with a partner. The mere act of gathering together is a powerful act. The
gatherings may be only a speaker and responder, but it’s the start of a
tribe. A communal spirit is created in which SOULSPEAK will erupt all by
itself. The larger and more receptive the group, the more powerful the spirit.
The ideal partnership, once you’ve mastered speaking to recorded music,
consists of a singer, musician, speaker, and responder. All of our MANY VOICES
albums are created this way. The albums consist of spontaneous, multi-voiced speakings,
with each partner improvising a separate thread or voice. This may seem
impossible, but remember, just a short time ago you probably thought speaking
itself was impossible. There are no rules as to how to create a multi-voiced speaking
with a live musician and singer. It may happen the very first time, or it may
take a number of tries until everyone is comfortable. Here are some
suggestions. Once you and your partner are able to spontaneously create a
speaking to recorded music with relatively little effort, you may want to
try working with a musician. But only one, please, because there is only so
much improvisation that can be easily accommodated. I suggest either guitar or
keyboard. The guitar is easier to start with, but today’s multi-functioned
keyboards offer a great deal more in the way of sound, and sound is what is
going to get your speaking going. I suggest you work with various
musicians who like to improvise until you find one who also likes
SOULSPEAK. They may not completely understand it, but it is important that
they like it as an art form. The best way to start out with a musician is to
let them improvise what they like, but in a tempo that is speakable. Don’t ask
them to play like so and so. Let them be who they are, just like you
want to be you. Whereas you may have pre-adjusted the nature of your speakings
to the recorded music you have, that luxury won’t be available to you in live
improvisation with a musician. You have to learn to relax and let the music
enter you, and then let go. You’re going to have to learn to surf the waves as
they come up.
Improvising
like this will influence your speaking, so don’t be surprised if
something entirely new in the way of a speaking comes out of you. That
is what’s supposed to happen. The same thing goes when you incorporate a
singer. By a singer I mean someone who likes to improvise wordless melodies.
Find a singer who likes to improvise melodies to the music you’re working with.
As with the musician, the singer doesn’t have to understand SOULSPEAK,
only like it. You don’t need a singer who only sings Barbra Streisand or Nina
Simone. Once you’ve found the right musician and right singer, let them begin to
create a layer of sound and then join in—main speaker first, then
responding speaker. Don’t wait too long to jump in, after all, this is a
collaboration, and it helps to know where the other players are, even if only
on an unconscious level. Don’t worry how it’s going to fit together. If
everyone is leaning together, you will hear the sound of the soul
speaking.
Although
we have been talking about incorporating a live singer or musician, most
likely, they will happen along much later in your development as a speaker.
Because of this, an important element to consider is the recorded music for SOULSPEAK.
The music on the enclosed CD, SOULSPEAK Music, is
what we use for our own speakings on our Many Voices
albums. Each piece of music was created as one of the spontaneous threads for a
particular speaking and later brought down through our multi-track
recording system. It wasn’t created in a vacuum and is thus extremely conducive
to the spirit and rhythms of speaking. You may choose to create your own
music for speaking, but work with the music on the CD before you go off
on your own. It was our intent from the beginning to try to imitate the
essential form of the music used in preliterate times. That ancient music, as
best we know, was extremely simple in structure. Most probably it was created
with a simple plucked instrument, and was relatively slow in tempo, with just
enough musicality to support the chanting of the speakers. Certainly the
music used was nothing like the sophisticated forms of music we have today.
Most contemporary music, except for some forms of jazz and new age, is very
difficult to use—too complete, too fat, too fast to allow speaking to
take place. What we needed was a slow, skinny music that gave the speakers
plenty of room.
Eventually
we gravitated toward creating an eclectic, relatively simple, wave-like music
that supported the tempo of our speakings. This may not always be the
right music for the speakings of others, but we have found it to be
almost universally acceptable. Use it until your body moves you towards
something else. Music is a right brain activity and that is the portion of the
brain we want to excite as much as possible, but not in a way that is contrary
to the formation of a speaking. We have found that the right music will
have a profound effect on your speaking. If you’re working with recorded
music, you should not begin a speaking until you have found a piece that
is leaning with you. To help you in this, we have created several CDs of
SOULSPEAK Music (see Appendix) that should give you plenty of
variety.
Story-telling Memory
This is why you can
tell the same nasty piece of gossip over and over.
As
you are well aware, any speakings you have created up to now have simply
gone up in smoke. You felt something happening, you heard the words and
the music, but you can’t really recall what you said outside of the fact that
it was beautiful and true. You can’t recall it verbatim, because that memory
facility (not used in oral poetry) is really an extension of writing. What you
do recall is what you recall after gossiping: the general theme, the
characters, the flavor. There is a way, however, to solidify your speaking
so that you can repeat it over and over to an audience, as preliterate poets
did in the later stages of tribal culture. Immediately begin again, using the
same starting phrase. Don’t worry about the rest, it may change a bit (it may
not), but after three or four passes the speaking will solidify through
“story-telling memory.”
Story-telling
memory works through visualization. It is the way poets like Homer (or
for that matter, all bardic poets) worked. They visualized what was happening
in much the same way as you when you gossip about a particular event. The
gossiping genius in you takes care of the rest—finding the right words to
describe what your body is visualizing. That visualization is not a
Cinemascope movie in which you describe every element on the screen. It doesn’t
happen that way. Think about what happens when you gossip. Something in you
selectively visualizes the story you are creating on many levels (sight,
feeling, sound, smell) and then somehow finds the words to describe it. In a
speaking, that something in you is a marriage of the self and soul,
but otherwise the machinery is the same. Thus, your speaking can
solidify itself in the same way that your spontaneous gossip solidifies itself.
This is why you can tell the same nasty piece of gossip over and over in the
blink of an eye and never
really know how you did it. Think about it.
I
have found, however, that over time, solidifying my speakings has become
of relatively little interest to me. I far prefer the first time—it is more
exciting, more fulfilling. I think this is true for most improvisational
artists. It is the way we record all of our Many Voices albums.
We come in, turn on the machinery, and let it happen. One take, that’s it. I
think that unless you have the talents and the drive of a performing artist,
you’ll probably feel the same way. If you have little interest in solidifying
your speakings, you’re left with two options: let your speakings
go up in smoke, or record them. I do both, depending on the circumstance.
Sometimes when I create a speaking for someone, just for them, they’ll
look at me as if to say, “What happened to the poem?” As if it only could have
validity if you can handle it, look at it, check the spelling. I usually tell
them we both have it now, inside us. Just us. After a moment’s pause they get
it, they really get it. After all that’s what poetry is all about isn’t it? A
communication from one soul to others.
• Some Recording Considerations
There
are times that you may want to record what is taking place, just so you can
hear what it sounds like, or perhaps let others hear it. Even though SOULSPEAK
is a participatory art, you’ll find that many people are drawn to its sound, as
strange as that sound may seem initially. We have also found that some of them
eventually try SOULSPEAK. This is the reason, by the way, that we record
our own speakings, which we call MANY VOICES.
The
equipment used for recording can be as simple as a dual cassette boom box with
a built-in microphone. Just let the music play from some other source (or from
one of the tape drives, if possible) and record the total result on the other
drive. The quality may be a bit fuzzy, but the spirit will be there. The next
step up is to use a good karaoke box with external microphones. These boxes
always tend to be heavy on bass (as they’re used primarily by screaming drunks
who want to be stars), so you’ll have to adjust the treble/bass balance to get
a good, sharp sound. Other than that, they’re excellent for a home-type sound.
I use them every day. If you want to create a sound more in keeping with
today’s professional standards, so that you can get air-play, or send them to
friends, you’ll find yourself in the recording business. That’s not as daunting
as it used to be. There are plenty of excellent portable recording platforms
that are easy to use and available at a reasonable cost. Regardless of the technique,
the essential beauty of a recording is that you can re-experience the speaking.
It is food for your soul. It will continually remind you of your luminosity,
because what you will hear is the sound of the soul speaking. It
is a sound like no other.
• Expanded Forms of SOULSPEAK
There
is really no end to the forms SOULSPEAK can take because the original
model is so rich. Preliterate, tribal poetry (the ancient model for SOULSPEAK)
is a poetry of many elements in which the participants displayed their souls in
a variety of ways: speech, costume, movement, and music. The result was a
spontaneous communal poetry of many faces, many voices, many souls. There
was no director. Only instinct and custom (which is another word for group
instinct) decided what each participant did. This is because within the broad
outlines of what was appropriate for a given occasion (for example, a
speaking celebrating the death of a tribe member) each individual created
his own costume (masks, body paint). They then joined in the group’s highly
improvisational rhythmic movement, rhythmic music, and rhythmic speech.
Before
you become overwhelmed, or the opposite, begin deliriously putting together all
you know about the various art forms that comprise tribal poetry, understand first
that the art forms must be in their most basic, reflexive state. To attempt to
put together modern versions of the various forms is impossible. Like the
verbal/musical parts, the movement and costume must be automatic and
instinctual. No thinking is allowed. Isolating what is automatic (for
you) in the various forms is not an easy task. The major part of this book is
dedicated to doing just that for the verbal/musical forms. So go slowly. Trust
your instincts, because the forms you are naturally (and strongly) drawn to
will determine the shape of SOULSPEAK that is possible for you.
We
are the sound of God speaking.
Thus
if you are someone who loves to dance, begin to feel your way toward what is
essential in your own moving. Maybe it’s a simple clapping, or stepping,
or swaying, or some combination. It’s for you to decide. Your moving has
to be automatic in you, and when it is, it will be the moving of your
soul. The same goes for mask or costume.
If
you are going to use masks, it is best to approach them as tribal man
approached them—not theatrically (which is the kiss of death in this case), but
as a display of the soul. The utter truth. To do this, you have to stop
thinking, and let the body assist the soul. One of the keys to reaching
this state of revelation is to let your body be directed by examples.
The best way to do this with masks is to go to your local library and get all
the picture books you can on tribal masks and face painting from as many
cultures as you can. American Indian masks, for example, are as extraordinary
as those from Africa or New Guinea or Polynesia, but are not widely known. Go
through the pictures, find the ones you are attracted to. Make color xeroxes of
those masks and paste them on your walls. Live with them for a few weeks or
months. Dream them. One of the things about tribal art is that it is automatic,
or reflexive. By reflexive I mean that the first paintings were face
paintings. They were an inborn recognition that the face is a display of
the soul. This is what looking at the masks will remind your body.
Secondly, tribal art requires no technical talent of the kind we normally
associate with art. The soul will tell the body what to do. Just do it:
yellow line here, red circle there, black ribbon here, silver spangles there.
Although
the advice is simple, your actual journey towards achieving your sense of SOULSPEAK
may be a long, meandering one. That’s OK. After all, the journey is what it’s
all about. Because the journey never ends, it just becomes more fulfilling and
strange and beautiful. The important thing is to always follow your instincts
as to how to display your soul. If costume or masks or body painting or
movement doesn’t really appeal to you, then don’t follow those paths. Let your body
guide you, not your mind, not your ego. The “path with heart,” as
Castenada reminds us, is the essential one. Or as Campbell would put it,
“Follow your bliss.” Both were saying: Follow what your body wants, that
makes music in your heart.
• Other Things to Focus On
Another
thing to continually focus on in your journey is the communal nature of SOULSPEAK.
Even though there are oral and written versions of SOULSPEAK that
can be practiced in isolation, they are merely shadows of the true SOULSPEAK,
which is communal in nature. In this sense, SOULSPEAK is the
opposite of meditation, which is practiced in isolation. Meditation has had an
immense appeal in a culture in which we are becoming increasingly isolated from
one another.
Our
increasing isolation from one another is an essential movement in our culture.
Where it will take us no one really knows, but its force is almost
irresistible. No wonder that we have continued to follow its movement through
the practice of meditation. After all, if the river is swift and powerful, go with
it, but find an eddy where you can live spiritually. But we are social
animals. We need to touch and be touched. All the electronic devices that are
both the effect and cause of this isolation (and which in turn are
simultaneously held up as cures) are not going to put Humpty Dumpty together
again after a certain point. Or, if we somehow manage to do it, it’s going to
be one very strange egg.
We
need to have spiritual countermeasures that bring us together. SOULSPEAK
is one of those countermeasures, taking the opposite path of meditation. If
meditation brings us to the timeless place that is the soul, SOULSPEAK
takes the opposite path and moves the many voices of the soul outward
into the world of time.
God
only speaks in time.
The
act of meditation and the act of speaking are both valid activities of
the soul. Up until recently, most of us knew nothing of meditation, but it has
been going on for thousands and thousands of years. We simply had to rediscover
it. The same is true, I believe, for the art of speaking.
15
Other
SOULSPEAK Catalysts
What
we want to do is bring the whale beneath the boat.
Earlier on, I
mentioned there were other catalysts besides seed words. Before I show them to
you, however, I want to say something about the use of seed words. Once people
get to know a bit about SOULSPEAK, one of the first things they assume
is that seed words determine the nature and content of the speaking. Although
I can understand their thinking this, given the mysterious way in which the speakings
materialize, nothing could be further from the truth. They simply act as
catalysts that allow the soul, which already knows what it wants to say, to
emerge into the physical world as a speaking. The soul is always
singing. But like the singing of whales, we are never aware of it. The whale is
too far beneath the boat. We need to bring the whale just beneath the boat and
let the vibrations come up through us as a speaking. To do this, we can
either wait for the whale to come under the boat or we can induce it into
coming under. Catalysts, such as seed words, are the inducers, the chum that
will bring the whale up. But catalysts aren’t always required. Sometimes SOULSPEAK
just happens. The use of catalysts is akin to a Caesarian (or induced) birth.
The baby is there, we just want it now. One of the effects of catalysts such as
seed words is that you can produce poetry on demand. And it’s not cheap poetry
either. I can tell you as a poet, that despite the fast food connotation, the
poems can be as shatteringly beautiful as anything I’ve produced without them.
Seed
words are the most convenient form of external catalyst. The object in creating
seed words is to produce a group of words that are related in some way, and
that allow the soul to emerge and grab onto the world of the self, in the same
spirit as a rock climber who grabs onto handholds and traverses the sheer cliff
face in front of him. If he is lucky, he’ll find handholds exactly where he
needs them in order to traverse the cliff in a movement of extraordinary
beauty. Similarly, the correct seed words will allow the soul to find the
handholds in the self to complete its extraordinary song. But how does one
create the correctly placed handholds? The first answer is, You don’t know.
And the second answer is, Intuition. In other words, you’re on your own.
But not quite, because there is an easy technique for deriving seed words. Let
me tell you how I discovered them.
The
idea of seed words first occurred to me after I began working with at-risk
children. The idea was to let them use SOULSPEAK in a direct therapeutic
manner to help them express their fears and conflicts. After a few examples the
children could sometimes create speakings spontaneously (with no outside
catalysts) but often they couldn’t. My theory was that SOULSPEAK should
come out of them as quickly and as easily as ordinary gossip. In theory it was
right, but in practice something was missing. Then one day, the idea of seed
words came to me. Although as I learned later, seed words are often used in
writing workshops to help direct the writer’s attention to certain areas, I was
ignorant of the technique. The idea came to me as a way of eliminating the
unknown roadblock the children were encountering. But to tell you the truth, I
didn’t really know what I was doing. I just had a feeling that the seven
words I put on the board would help them create their speakings, and
they did, even though I didn’t know how, or why.
The
seven words continued to work and the children were able to produce speakings
almost on demand, which made the therapeutic use of SOULSPEAK an
extraordinary success. Thousands of at-risk children of all ages and
backgrounds have participated in the program since that time. I never
understood why seven seed words was the correct number, but it turns out it is.
Use more, and the speaking tends to degenerate into simply a story,
gossip. Use less, and the speaking never gets off the ground. No matter
what group of children I have worked with (and they have ranged from slow
learners to children with severe emotional and anger management problems to
young boys and girls in juvenile justice facilities), the technique has worked
so that every child has been able to create a speaking. Not only does it
make them feel gifted but its communal nature helps break down the walls of
isolation that surround them. It was when I saw what was happening to the
children that I began to dimly realize that SOULSPEAK was meant for everyone.
And that catalysts such as seed words were a way to bring SOULSPEAK to them.
Seed
words are by far the most popular catalyst. At first, I developed lists of seed
words that I handed out. Some were for general use. But some were for specific
purposes, as it soon became clear to me that seed words could be developed to
direct the unconscious attention of at-risk children to specific areas such as
physical and sexual abuse. Some of those lists, by the way, are contained in
the Appendix. More importantly, it became clear to me that seed words could be
created by anyone. All that was needed was a general rule. Rules, of course,
are meant to be violated, and the Seven Categories Rule that I eventually came
up with is no exception. Nevertheless, experience has shown it to be remarkably
useful.
The Seven Categories
Rule
Categories Examples
Family
member or loved one Mother,
father, sister, grandfather, God, pet, boyfriend, wife, uncle.
Color
Yellow, black, purple, white, red
Positive
emotion or feeling Warm, love,
comfort
laugh,
happy, peaceful,
serene,
light, smile
Negative
emotion or feeling Cold, hate,
sharp, cry, sad, stormy, angry, dark, frown.
Structural
part of a house Roof, floor,
stairs, wall, window, door, attic, cellar, hall
Part
of the body Face, eyes, mouth, lips, nose, arms,
belly, lungs, heart, brain
Something
in nature Dog, sky, moon,
stars, river, parrot, lake, mountain, leaf
Here’s how the Seven
Categories Rule works. Look at a particular category in a very relaxed way.
Write down the first word that comes to you, no matter how lightly it comes or
how foolish (or dangerous) it seems. Do it quickly. No hiding. No thinking.
It’s okay for someone else to create a seed word list for you, especially your SOULSPEAK
partner. Try it.
OTHER TYPES OF
CATALYSTS
► SPECIALIZED SEED WORDS/GREAT POETS SOULSPEAK
There is a
specialized way of developing seed words that revolves around a version
of SOULSPEAK for children, called: Great Poets SOULSPEAK.
It works well with middle and elementary school students. The idea is to bring
every child in the class immediately into the world of poetry, and that
means every child and immediately. This is done using the SOULSPEAK
process along with seed words taken from a great poem.
The
poems of Robert Frost are an excellent source because they are simple in
vocabulary, narrative in form, and (although they are truly great poems) they
can be understood on some level at almost any age. Generally, the children
write their speakings (in stream of consciousness form) because the
objective is to use the SOULSPEAK process to bring them into the great
world of written poetry.
After they have
created their SOULSPEAK poems, they are shown the Frost poem from which
the seed words were taken. It brings them into the big leagues immediately.
They know how to ride the bike. Maybe they don’t know how it works, what the
brakes are for, or the gear changer, but they know how to ride. When they are
shown the Frost poem they see what he did with the same words, or the
feelings represented by the seed words.
You
should see the intensity on their faces as they read the Frost poem. They learn
more about great poetry in those few moments than they could ever learn by more
didactic methods. The Frost poem is then used to illustrate the mechanics of
written poetry, i.e. the rules for line break, stanza break, and so on. The
children rewrite their written, stream of consciousness speakings to
conform with these rules. What makes it so powerful is that the poems created
by the SOULSPEAK process are not trivial poems. Frost would be proud of
them. And the kids know it. Their bodies know it.
At the current time,
three forms of visual catalysts are used in the SOULSPEAK process: masks,
paintings, and videos. The masks and paintings are used to create a set of
seed words through a specialized extraction technique. These seed words are
then used to create a speaking that is related to the mask or painting.
In the video technique, the speaking is created spontaneously from the
changing images, which are particularly powerful catalysts. They also allow you
to marry your speaking (as a soundtrack) to the video image.
► Soulmasks
A mask is created
(or a picture of an actual primitive mask is chosen) by the potential speaker.
The speaker then asks the following questions of the mask and writes
down the answers:
• What season of the year is this mask
worn?
• What color in the mask is most
appealing?
• Who does
this mask remind you of besides yourself?
• What is
the main emotion the mask is feeling?
• What is the opposite of that
emotion?
• Where is this mask worn?
• What animal does the mask remind you
of?
You will wind up with a good set of seven seed words close in composition to the Seven Categories Rule. You then create a spontaneous speaking, not as yourself, but as the persona of the mask, i.e., you speak as the mask would. I call this process SOULMASK. There is an imaginative freedom resulting from the speaker becoming the mask. I’ve had sixth grade children create poetry of such a complex texture you’d swear it came from adults.
► Paintings
Use a painting or
photograph by the potential speaker, or chosen by the speaker.
The painting or picture should be narrative and not abstract in any way. It
should revolve around a figure or figures. If the picture has been made by the
speaker, quality is not important. Otherwise, the painting (or picture)
should be a masterpiece. This process is called SOULART. The questions
asked are as follows:
• Which color is the
most appealing to you?
• What emotion is
the main figure feeling?
• What is the
opposite of that emotion?
• Who (member of
your family—including yourself) does the main figure remind you of?
• What time of day
is the painting taking place?
• What thing or
object in the painting is the most
appealing to you?
• Where is this
painting taking place?
When you have a good
set of seven seed words, create the speaking in the persona of the main
figure.
► Videos
The following
technique is best used with a narrative painting or collage that is extremely
dense in construction. If the artist who made the visual is available, ask them
to create a video of it at extremely close range so as to reveal only one or
two elements at a time as the camera travels slowly through the work.
Otherwise, do it yourself. How the camera travels through the work is up to the
cameraman, but the idea is to create a new work of art, one that reveals itself
in a river of time. When the video is finished, play it back and create a
soundtrack speaking using the images as “seed words.” This process is
called SOULVIDEO.
NOTE:
In our studio, we do this all at once, improvisationally, adding the
cameraman/artist as a fifth member to our normal four-person SOULSPEAK group,
MANY VOICES. This way the cameraman can react to what the four other members
are doing and vice versa. Try this after you have mastered all the other
catalyst techniques. It is extremely powerful, directly stimulating the right
brain as you speak.
You now have a variety of CATALYSTS to
get you speaking. All of them are easily accomplished.
As
you can also easily create a video that includes both the visual and audio
portions of the various visual forms of SOULSPEAK, you can create an
album of visual speakings of extraordinary beauty. We have also found
that is a good way to introduce others to SOULSPEAK. After all, we live
in a highly visual culture. One of the problems I’ve experienced in introducing
people to SOULSPEAK is that they want something to look at. They find it
difficult to just listen, which, by the way, becomes much easier once you start
to do SOULSPEAK. Still, why fight traffic? Since the visual forms of SOULSPEAK
offer a convenient doorway through which strangers can experience its beauty,
why not use it? And what makes it particularly intriguing is that the visuals
are so intimately related to the speakings. When you view or create a SOULSPEAK
piece using visual catalysts, you begin to sense what tribal man experienced in
his multi-faceted portrayals of the soul.
I
consider SOULSPEAK to be an evolving art form that can be used by anyone,
and I literally mean anyone. What forms it may take and to what ends
it may be used are up to those who learn it. I do know this: SOULSPEAK
will change your life if you let it. By this I mean once you create a speaking,
and most especially a speaking with others, a door will open within you.
You may choose to close that door forever or walk through it, but, either way, you
will never be the same.
16
SOULSPEAK
as an Aid to Writing Poetry
The
self makes verse; the soul makes poetry.
This chapter is
intended for those who are writing poetry but having difficulty composing their
poems. SOULSPEAK can be of immense help if your poems are coming in
little bursts, or pieces—like static-filled, incomplete radio broadcasts that
you then try to stitch together. This happens to all poets in the very
beginning. But quite soon, if they are poets of genius (or after many years of
work if they’re not), a breakthrough occurs and the poems begin to come quite
easily—almost completely formed. This happens when you stop bouncing between
the self and the soul as the poem comes to you. You stay in the zone of
the soul and forget what the self is saying to you. The self always
wants to play it safe. It gets scared and wants to pull you up from the deep
dive of the soul. What you wind up with then is little bursts of poetry
between big slices of self. Nobody wants that sandwich.
Another
way of describing that eventual breakthrough is to say that the channel between
self and soul somehow changes from an on again/off again dirt road to a
four-lane highway. Once that happens, it’s hard to go wrong. As shown in
workshops conducted for developing poets of all ages, the SOULSPEAK
process can affect that breakthrough in a matter of hours. All you need is the
courage to throw away everything you know about writing poetry for a few hours
and create some speakings. The act of speaking automatically creates
a very wide channel between the self and the soul—re-opening a buried channel.
The feeling associated with being on this new, wide channel will remind you to
stay off the dirt road when you return to writing poetry. You’ll know what it
feels like to be on the expressway. When you go back to writing, not only will
your poems begin to form quite easily, but also an alarm will go off whenever
you start to slip off the expressway. You’ll feel it.
The reason poets get stuck initially on
the dirt road is due to the “Lorenz factor.” When you write your first poems,
you’re very much like the newly hatched goslings the naturalist Hans Lorenz
observed attaching themselves to the first moving body they saw. In Lorenz’s
experiments, he made himself the first body his newly hatched goslings
saw, so that they immediately (and permanently) locked on to him as if he were
their real mother. They followed him around everywhere, despite his lack of
feathers. Similarly, when our very first poems come to us, we unconsciously (and
perhaps consciously) assume many of the forms and poses and attitudes of the
poet (or poets) who first awakened the spirit of poetry in us. It happens to
everybody. Poets of genius soon slough that costume off and create their own.
But everyone else has to work on it.
One
of the reasons your poems may be coming to you incompletely is that you’re
still trying to fit your soul into someone else’s costume. This may have
worked for your first few poems (which are probably more Lorenz’s than yours
anyway), but as you grew, the Lorenz costume became more and more in conflict
with who you were becoming as a poet. Doing SOULSPEAK for a few hours is
the easiest way to stop following Lorenz around. It requires you to
(temporarily) forget everything you know about written poetry, and that
automatically includes your Lorenz costume. This “unlocking” happens, because,
compared to written poetry, SOULSPEAK is a relatively formless poetry.
It contains none of the forms and poses and diction and attitudes associated with
written poetry. When the speakings come to you they will use an entirely
different route to get out—a route that bypasses the instinct to automatically
follow Lorenz.
You
will emerge not clothed in your Lorenz costume, but somewhat naked and very
close to the real poetic you. (This will occur, by the way, only if you have
followed the instructions about forgetting everything.) Once you’re
naked, you can begin writing your poetry again, but this time you won’t be
following Lorenz. If you listen to your body, something in you will
retain the parts of your Lorenz costume that are still useful, and slough off
the parts it no longer needs. You’re on your own after that, but you will have
taken a tremendous jump. More importantly, your body will know what it feels
like to be on a highway all the time as compared to those dirt roads. This body
knowledge is important because you’ll have a tendency to get on those dirt
roads again when the ferocity of the expressway starts to scare you. But this
time around, your body will signal you, like an alarm. The trick is to stay on
the highway (no matter how scary) and not take those dirt roads where the poem
bounces between the self and the soul. This is why your poems have been so
uneven. Let the soul make the poem, no matter what the self thinks you should
be doing. The self makes verse; the soul makes poetry. Get rid of the self. Of
course, once you’ve tasted SOULSPEAK, you may find it so attractive you
may begin to use both it and your usual written composition process. You may
even give up writing poetry altogether. What will actually happen to you is up
to the gods. At any rate, don’t worry about it. It won’t be a conscious
decision anyway. Your soul will let you know the path to take.
Part
IV
Some
Final Thoughts on SOULSPEAK
17
Some
Final Thoughts on SOULSPEAK
The
art of speaking offers each of us a way of becoming
the
mysterious, luminous beings we really are.
The chapters that
follow this one are intended primarily for poets. If you are not a poet, the
last half of this book may not be of interest. It may have some relevance for
you, however, if you have succeeded in creating a few speakings, because
by that act you have become a poet: you have entered that world. Of course, by
entering that world so directly and so naturally, you have created a different
poetry. SOULSPEAK is a poetry so human and powerful and direct that it
doesn’t really suffer from the same problems and concerns that contemporary
written poetry does. Because of this, you may find much of what I have to say
to be somewhat academic, maybe even beside the point. But it may also allow you
to appreciate the true value of speaking in allowing you to fly without
having to strap on a set of cumbersome wings and all the gears and pulleys and
levers and pedals needed to make them flap fast enough. Ask Leonardo if you
have any doubts.
I
fully expect that many poets will disagree with my observations on the beauty
and power of speaking, especially those who have not been able, or
willing, to orally create a speaking despite the simplicity of the SOULSPEAK
process. For those who have actually created a few speakings, however,
the power of oral poetry should have become much more tangible and something
not so easily dismissed. If I have accomplished only that, then there is reason
to hope that some of us can begin to take advantage of what oral poetry can
teach us. How much those insights will influence the direction of our current
poetry culture is difficult to say. Most probably it will choose to continue on
its own difficult, isolated path. I hope that as a result of this book some of
you will continue to speak on a continuing basis (much as people
currently practice meditation) simply for the luminosity it brings to your
life. There is no way of predicting in what manner the art of speaking
will affect you. That mystery, after all, is at the heart of all journeys. I
also hope some of you will choose to pass it on to friends, informally, much as
the practice of meditation is often passed on.
All
it takes to give someone a taste is a few words about the general idea of SOULSPEAK,
followed by some friendly encouragement and an example. Then, if you actually
take ten minutes and create a few speakings with them, they should be
ready to try speaking on their own. It doesn’t matter in what form you
pass the speaking on: single voiced, multi-voiced, even writing the speaking.
The important thing is to pass it on in the form most comfortable for them and
for you. The rest is up to them. Your job is to plant the seed, just as I’ve
planted it within you. If they’re intrigued, perhaps reading this book would be
a helpful next step. It depends on how easily they catch fire. This is an art
that is within us, easily reawakened simply by doing it with others. There
really is no need for formal workshops, although some people may find them
helpful, especially if they have difficulty in reaching the emotional state
necessary for speaking to occur. Learning how to speak is much
easier in a true communal environment. Once people begin to speak,
they’ll be entirely capable of developing the art to whatever level is correct
for them. All they have to bring to the table is courage and generosity.
The
real function of the art of speaking is to give each of us a way of displaying
our soul, a way of turning ourselves inside out, of feeling how mysterious and
luminous we really are. Unless we have some way of doing this, we are in danger
of becoming slowly de-humanized. Don’t get me wrong. We’ll be very civil about
the whole thing. We will simply become dim creatures in dim rooms and not even
know it. I don’t think there is any way of stopping this movement. The best we
can do is to create isolated pockets where we can become momentarily luminous.
Some may find this outlook far too pessimistic, but I see it as realistic. It’s
what is in store for us whether we like it or not.
We
are becoming dimmer for many reasons. For one thing, we are racing away from
pain at an alarming rate—a rate so fast I sometimes think we are in danger of
exceeding the speed of light. Yet we know from our greatest teachers that the
acceptance of pain is the way to become fully human. Indeed, one of the
functions of art is to help us accept this paradox. Every Greek, down to the
lowliest son of a hide-tanner, went to the annual tragedies. To not attend was
to admit to being less than a man. We have no such role for art in our society.
Much of our art (and especially corporate art) is structured to ignore
pain. Life, however, is pain: the pain of death, of birth, sickness,
loneliness, failure, even the most ecstatic and piercing love has an element of
pain. Unless we find some way to help us come to terms with this paradox, we
will live increasingly de-humanized lives and not even know it. That is what is
so terrifying.
When
I say we are racing away from pain, I don’t necessarily mean through the drugs
of all descriptions that increasingly dominate our lives (although they play a
role as they always have). Life has always been painful and people have always
taken drugs to numb or enlighten themselves. Whether we are more drugged than
in other times is hard to say. Certainly we have a greater variety. What is
unique in our times is not drugs but the fact that we are the first society
that has figured out a way to avoid the pain caused by personal contact. We
didn’t plan it this way, or at least I don’t think we did. Rather it seems to
be a by-product of the technology that has allowed us live isolated lives and
yet still communicate with each other efficiently. Too efficiently. In a recent
TV interview, I heard a marine general state that he trained his men the way he
did so they could handle the immense fear war causes. He said he didn’t mean
the napalm and the lasers and the bombs they had to face, but the terrifying
moment when they had to look in the eyes of a man a few feet away intent on
killing them. That, he said, is the real fear they have to learn to handle, and
that everything else pales by comparison.
The
general was right, of course. It’s what we go through every day, in the office,
at parties, making love, shopping, arguing, and playing. Because what we are
dealing with in those situations is a human being capable of harming us in
every way we can possibly imagine. The fact that it seldom happens doesn’t make
any difference. Deep inside we know what we are capable of doing to others—and
what they are capable of doing to us. That is the real danger we face, and have
always faced. Not pollution, or unsafe cars, or global warming (at least not as
far as our psyches are concerned). Our psyches have their antennae out all the
time—the same antennae that constantly feed our dreams—and they are telling us
(among other things) that we live in a constant state of potential pain. After
all, humans are magnificent, weird, beautiful, bristly, dangerous creatures.
We’re not at the top of the food chain for nothing.
Our
technological prowess has given us a way to minimize that potential pain of
contact. We do it by contacting each other electronically. I do it. You do it.
Whether we do it to avoid pain or just for convenience, doesn’t really matter.
The effect is the same. We block out a part of someone’s humanity and lose a
part of our own in return. Even if we are innocent of this intent (like
Pavlov’s dog), we soon sense the advantage of being out of reach and hit the
button. I know some idiot is going to pipe up, “Not to worry, we’ll soon have
holographs as real as us.” As if we were only a collection of biomechanical
parts and not the luminous beings we truly are. One has only to sit in one of
those thousand dollar massage chairs to realize once and for all that nothing
substitutes for the miracle of being touched by another human being.
And
like the hands of another, nothing substitutes for face- to-face encounters, as
volatile as they potentially are. When we avoid the bristly, dangerous parts of
each other, we also lose those that are warm and loving. You can’t have only
one side of the moon. You lose one side of the moon, you lose both, simple as
that. You become dimmer. It’s so insidious, and so attractive, I see no way of
stopping it. If you sit back and think about it, our increasing dimness (or
numbness) explains why our young people have difficulty working with others and
are so attracted to acts of self-interest, self-mutilation, and meaningless
sex. Compare it to the sixties. It’s not a cycle. The next generation will be
even worse. After all, men have been searching for a release from pain since
the beginning of time, and here it is right at our fingertips. Finally.
In a recent C-SPAN panel on de
Tocqueville’s sense of the American spirit, someone put forth a proposition of
de Tocqueville’s that Americans were obsessed both by the spirit of
self-interest and the spirit of religious practice, and that the two kept each
other in balance. And if religion, with its emphasis on something larger than
the self, were to disappear, the vital American democracy would simply devolve
into a bureaucratic arrangement to facilitate self-interest. This is what is
happening to us today. Although we are still one of the most religious modern
nations, religion’s ability to influence our spiritual lives is rapidly waning.
The statistics may or may not show that we are losing our religion, as the song
says, and more people than ever may be going to church, but it is often to
churches whose teachings are no longer concerned with man’s relation to the
unknowable, but to a disguised form of self-interest. Give to God, get double
your money back. New cars. Money in the bank.
In
the meantime, our government is becoming exactly what de Tocqueville predicted.
Although he was primarily concerned with what would happen to our political
institutions, I find his observations almost a parallel to my own sense that
our humanity is slipping into a very dim state. We are just coming at it from
different vantage points. Where we join is in the observation that something
larger than the self is required to balance our lives. Religion, for de
Tocqueville was the way to keep our rampant spirit of self-interest at bay, and
keep our society vital. But it is also the way we learn to make sense of pain.
Once religion loses its power to convince us, we are set adrift in a sea of
confusion and hopelessness. What we do then is learn to push the button that
limits the pain. It is a completely painless operation. Dim boys in a dim
room.
Although
it is a large claim that art can replace religion as a guiding force, it is the
only viable candidate. The Greek theater (and specifically the tragedies)
played something of this role for the Greeks. If we were to look for a
counterpart today both in terms of potential artistic power and universal
accessibility, it would be the movies. I don’t think it’s going to happen. The
forces of corporate art are simply too strong. Although there may be
many who see things much as I do, there would have to be a counter-movement of
immense size to even begin to change the course of the dry river that is
sweeping us away.
Of
course there is another problem, and that is the nature of our art forms. The
form of the Greek theater was quite close to its tribal ancestor in that it was
both a religious and aesthetic experience for the audience. The two hadn’t
become separated as they have in our times. One can hardly compare the intensity
and sense of awe of a Greek audience at the Tragedies to our own level of
expectation as we approach our neighborhood movie house. While we might be able
to approach the aesthetic level of the Tragedies, our arts are no longer part
of our spiritual lives. That relationship could change. But it would require a
massive change in the nature of our culture. It may happen, but the forces
against it are immense. One can only hope.
There
is another way to resist this dimming of our lives, and that is with individual
action. It is what some of our ancestors did to survive the dark ages. Today,
there are any number of small counter-movements that focus on things we can do
as individuals to protect our humanity and spirituality. These usually involve
teachings of some kind, but some, such as meditation, don’t have any particular
set of teachings to espouse. SOULSPEAK is also a neutral type of
activity. It simply teaches you how to do something. That something, of course,
is the act of speaking. What makes it particularly powerful is that it
is based on an art form that was used when art and religion were not separate
entities but the same thing. Speaking was the way tribal man spoke to
the gods. It was the way he praised the gods by imitating the essential mystery
of creation and destruction.
That was very long ago, when we lived in a
tribal state. We can’t go back to that time, but we can learn from it. We can
learn how to speak. That act is timeless. It is also, by its very
nature, both a spiritual and aesthetic experience. We simply have to reclaim
it, because speaking is a very human way to align ourselves with the
immense mystery that surrounds us. The art of speaking, however, doesn’t
guarantee happiness or success. Art doesn’t offer that, doesn’t even pretend to.
It simply allows us to know, in a way that is beyond logic, what it really
means to be human. It allows us to understand, on a blood level, that we are a
part of something that is impossibly beautiful and impossibly true. Beyond that
we are on our own. After all, life is a dangerous and beautiful business. The
only true guarantee we all have is that one day we will die. Until that time,
the art of speaking offers each of us, if only for a few moments, a way
of becoming the mysterious, luminous beings we really are. In the light of that
luminosity, everything makes sense: love pain death birth. That is what I am
offering you. Nothing more. Nothing less.
Part
V
Introduction
to Part V
We
know it existed, but we wish it didn’t.
For those of you who
are curious about the poetry of preliterate times and how it relates to the
poetry of today, I thought it would be useful if I shared my thoughts on these
matters in this half of the book. Although one would think there would be a
good fund of knowledge about preliterate poetry, there isn’t. Except for some
specialized scholarship, there is general ignorance of the subject, especially
among poets themselves who find it hard to accept that a valid poetry exists
outside the act of writing. The best way to sum up this general attitude is: we
know it existed, but we wish it didn’t. For most poets, poetry and writing are
viewed as coterminous events. Anything that existed before the act of writing
is simply shoved aside as a kind of embarrassment. After all, it’s not
literature. Oh, we’ll accept Homer, is the general view, but let’s get on with
a poetry that really means something. Who needs a primitive, unsophisticated,
spoken poetry?
I knew very little about oral poetry
before SOULSPEAK began to unfold itself within me. All I had were
rumors. The more involved I became with the art of speaking, however,
the more aware I became of the fact that oral poetry was anything but
primitive. Not only did I become convinced that it was a poetry of immense
power (perhaps even beyond that of written poetry), but that it could help us
look at the nature of poetry in a new way. It became increasingly clear to me
that it could shed some light on why poetry—the most human and most profound of
our arts—has ceased to be a meaningful influence in our lives.
There was very little interest,
however, in the insights I had gained from oral poetry. Our poetry culture,
which has become hopelessly intertwined with our academic culture, simply
wasn’t interested. Forget that poets themselves had problems with a spoken
poetry, a more serious problem was that the poetry culture had taken up many of
the values of our academies—values that often run counter to the true interests
of poetry. After all, academies are scholarly institutions. Poetry is an art.
There is an inherent conflict. Scholarship is always looking to the past. Art
is, by necessity, on the edge of what is. But that conflict is a problem
for all types of poetry—written and spoken. With spoken poetry, however, there
is an additional problem. This is because spoken poetry (and especially oral
poetry) is not literature, and our academies have no place for poetry outside
of literature. It’s a Catch-22. Literature departments function best when they
perform their historically accepted role of studying, explicating, and
preserving written documents. How can you do that with an oral poetry? It is
even difficult to do with performance poetry, as there is often much more to it
than words on a page. There would have to be a radical change in the structure
of literature departments to accommodate the field of spoken poetry. This
change, of course, would be difficult. Our academies preserve better than they
innovate.
It’s
going to be a long time before our poetry culture begins to open itself to
forms other than the written. Whatever spoken poetry has to teach us will have
to take place outside our academies. And while I sometimes feel that our poetry
culture will eventually catch up, it is just as likely that it never will. This
half of the book, an extension of my essay, “A New Call for an Older Poetry”
(available on our webswite), documents the insights I gained from my practice
and study of ancient and contemporary oral poetry. It has become a point of reference
for those who feel, like myself, that poetry has to become increasingly spoken
if is to make a difference in our lives.
18
The
State of Contemporary Poetry
Language
today more and more wants to be
spoken
and heard, rather than written and read.
I don’t think you’d
get much argument today that poetry, as an art, has ceased to influence our
lives in any meaningful way. Yet there are some poets who will tell you that
poetry is doing very well thank you, as well as it ever has. But the evidence
suggests this simply isn’t so. There are other poets, however, who will agree
that poetry has lost its way. Some even suggest that poetry had its last high
mark in the thirteenth century, or the seventeenth, or the early twentieth. But
none can seem to come to any consensus on the matter, let alone suggest a
remedy. This is because their time frame is too small to see the true curve of
decline. If you extend it back to the emergence of man as an artistic being,
say around 30,000 B.C., you can quite easily say that the decline of poetry
began with the emergence of writing around 1500 B.C.
Prior
to the advent of writing, poetry was everything. Anyone who argues with that is
ignorant of history. After the advent of writing and the splintering of the
arts, poetry began its slow decline. If you were to graph that decline, with
the horizontal X axis indicating time (1500 B.C. to 2000 A.D.) and the vertical
Y axis indicating influence on our lives (0% to 100%), you would have a
gradually declining line. You might notice, however, a particularly sharp
decline setting in around 1500 A.D. and then again around 1920, accelerating
rapidly in that same direction after 1950. These little anomalies correspond to
the widespread introduction of the printing press (1500); the phone, radio, and
movies, (1920); and then, finally, television (1950). These anomalies may seem
senseless to some, but the first date (printing press) corresponds to the
decline of oral poetry and the subsequent rise of written poetry as the
dominant form. The two latter dates correspond to the decline of written poetry
as we began our very rapid change into a semi-oral society—a society where
speaking began to replace writing as the dominant form of artistic, social and
political communication.
All
this may make you think that poetry is indeed in a terminal state. Well, it is,
but it can be resurrected quite easily. It simply has to change form from the
written to the oral. This may seem impossible, but it’s not. It just takes
time. And courage. After all, poetry has changed form before. When writing
emerged, poetry changed from oral to written of its own accord. At the time
there was probably much debate against that happening, but it happened. Simple
as that. And as we change more and more into a semi-oral society, I sense
something equally potent is waiting in the wings for poetry today. Because what
is slowly emerging from the clubs and cafés and theatres outside our academies
is not a new form of written, “speech-like” poetry (although variations will leak
out from time to time as they always have), but various forms of lyric,
spoken poetry based on the principles of oral (not written)
composition.
I
should make some distinctions between spoken and oral poetry, as
they mean slightly different things. Spoken poetry is a general term I
use for any poetry that is created to be spoken and which may be accompanied by
music. Such a poetry may be initially created by the act of speaking alone, in
which case I would classify it as a true oral poetry, or it could be created
by writing, or some combination of writing and speaking, in which case I would
classify it as performance poetry. Most rap poetry, slam poetry, and
jazz poetry fall into this latter category. From my own point of view, I see
them as approximations of a true oral poetry. They are attempts to create an
oral poetry without having to give up entirely the act of writing. Oral poetry,
on the other hand, is a much rarer bird. It is a term I use specifically for a
poetry that is composed without any use of writing or its mental analogues.
SOULSPEAK is an example of such a poetry. It is composed (in principle)
exactly as preliterate poetry was: by unpremeditated, narrative speaking.
Although performance poetry is by far the more widely practiced today, I believe
oral poetry is the Galápagos that holds the true key to understanding how
poetry can survive as a meaningful art.
We
are living in an age where speech is rapidly replacing writing as the major
form of artistic communication. If this is so, it makes sense for poets to
screw up their courage and take a long, hard look at oral poetry and the oral
creation of poems. Just about every poet I have spoken to about this
observation has viewed it as the equivalent of a UFO sighting. Just the idea of
speaking out a poem at the moment of creation (rather than writing it) seems to
them not only deranged but impossible. And horribly backward. And frightening.
And yet, having made the transition from a written, to a performance, and
(finally) to a truly oral poetry, I can say that, while my own journey was
difficult at times, I have found the oral to be one of the most immediate and
natural forms for poetry to take.
Oral
poetry existed for thousands of years prior to the emergence of a written
poetry. What’s more, oral poetry continued to exist side by side with written
poetry until the force of the printing press eventually extinguished it in all
but the most remote corners of the world. But reading and writing are on a
head-on collision course with our electronically connected culture: we are
returning to a new form of oral society in which a major portion of social,
political, and artistic communication will be accomplished by speaking rather
than writing. This change has already effected a corresponding change in the
structure of our language and our expectations of it. It is a change that has
been taking place since the late twenties, when the effect of the telephone and
radio and talking movies first began to be felt by our culture. But it was our
old friend television, in the fifties, that accelerated the change to the point
where it can no longer be ignored. And because poetry is so intimately
connected to language, it took the biggest hit, notably the loss of its
natural, non-academic audience, after just a few generations of the telephone
and movies and radio and television.
This
loss should be no surprise given the force of these new instruments. But it is
a surprise the way poets still ignore or deny the possibility of creating a
viable, contemporary, spoken poetry while at the same time continuing to
solely champion a written poetry that, no matter how magnificent it may be, is
increasingly out of touch with the sea of language we are all being forced to
swim in today—a language that more and more wants to be spoken and heard rather
than written and read. To ignore this fact is to ignore the obvious, something
our poetry culture can be extremely adept at. If there are barbarians at the
gates, they will simply do what they have always done when threatened: pull up
the drawbridge and settle down to passing manuscripts among themselves.
This
is happening today; because even though slams and black rap have already
established a vast, non-academic audience for a poetry more spoken than
written, our poetry culture has remained all but blind to their existence. My
own experience with the oral creation of poetry, and in particular the
contemporary version of antiphonal poetry I call SOULSPEAK, has
convinced me that out of this counter-Gutenberg revolution (of which slams and
rap are only a very crude beginning) a new generation of poets will eventually
emerge who will create a lyric, spoken poetry linked in many ways to the
ancient, oral traditions of the preliterate world. How long this will
take is anybody's guess, bound as our poetry culture is to the act of writing.
Much of it will take place outside of our academies. But there is no doubt that
we will eventually see more and more poets choosing to create not only a
performance poetry, but a true oral poetry.
Whether
we like it or not, we are all being pulled back to a poetry that wants to
resemble speech (because that has always been a reoccurring eddy in the river
of written poetry), but also to something entirely new to our times: a true oral
poetry. Not a performance poetry, but a lyric, oral poetry that
uses rhythmic music and the matrix of speech to realize itself—an
unpremeditated, narrative speech, the kind of speech that takes place
spontaneously between friends (and enemies) when matters of the heart are discussed.
This is because unpremeditated, narrative speech is the only engine that can
drive a true oral poetry. It is the very engine that drove the oral poetry of
the past and gave it such power. While such a poetry can be approximated by
writing it (or writing and then performing it), the result is never quite
satisfactory because the act of speaking is fundamentally different from the
act of writing. For poetry to regain its audience, it must become more spoken.
That is the only face of poetry that our new, continually distracted, orally
tuned culture is going to pay any attention to.
19
What Oral Poetry
Brings to the Table
If
the Psalms, orally composed narratives chanted
to
rhythmic music, still appeal to us today in their desiccated, written form,
imagine
how powerful they were when originally spoken!
There are ways that
written poetry can profit from the inherent attractiveness of spoken (and oral)
poetry in this semi-oral age of ours. Some significant part of written poetry
will become more speakeable and hearable as a result of honoring
the principles of oral composition. And yet, having created a good number of
poems in both forms, I can say that I have almost lost my taste for writing
poems. Compared to oral creation, it's like making love by remote control. I
feel the same way when I listen to or read written poetry, including my own.
This
personal experience with oral creation has lead me to believe that only poems
that are orally composed can fulfill the potential of a language that
increasingly wants to be spoken (and heard). This may be a difficult apple for
many poets to swallow, but it is what the gods have placed on a low-hanging
branch for us. When poems are truly orally composed (i.e., when the poet
completely surrenders to the act of unpremeditated narrative speech), the whole
structure of the poem changes. It begins to have those qualities that have
defined oral poetry since time immemorial. The poem is more direct in structure
and tone, driven by narrative, more married to music, less elaborate in
imagery, more immediate, and finally and most importantly, intimately linked to
the changing structure of our language.
Oral poetry brings something
else—something unexpected—to poets lost all their lives in the silent, private
world of writing. Oral poetry brings something immensely spiritual, both to
speakers and listeners. It brings the sound of the soul speaking.
This may seem a bit over the top for many, especially those who are more at
home with the silent, printed word. But it is the only way to describe the
peculiar effect of a true oral poetry when it hits the mark—especially
multi-voiced oral poetry, which is the true, essential form of oral poetry. It
is a sound both human and divine. It is the sound of beauty and the sound
of truth, with a pacing and authority that come from a deeper source than the
self. We can begin to see why oral poetry had such power for our ancestors.
Great written poetry also brings us this sense of authentic speech, but not as
a physical sound. Rather it brings it about through a corresponding, or
analogue, interior sense inherent in the act of writing. It is not quite the
same sound, however. Even when great, speechlike poets (like Frost) speak their
poems, something of the sound of oral poetry is produced, but not all of
it.
Whether
spoken poetry is welcomed and allowed to enlarge and nourish our poetry culture
will depend on whether it is viewed as an alien or familiar form. To understand
spoken poetry (and oral poetry in particular) it is important to take a look at
the history and nature of written poetry, and not just accept it as a given
since the beginning of time. After all, it is just one form of poetry, not the
only one. (And in the grand scheme of things, a relatively new one at that.)
Written poetry's genius is that it produces the unique moment of awareness we
call poetry, a moment both impossibly beautiful and impossibly true, solely
through the arrangement of alphabetic symbols on the page. Written poetry
answers the question: how do you make a poetry when you're denied the
structural elements that gave ancient oral poetry its peculiar power? The
answer is that you do it by approximating those elements through the
"forms" of written poetry: meter, rhyme, line, stanza, and all their
restless and endless permutations. It is sometimes difficult for us to imagine
that our transcribed and translated versions of the Psalms and The
Iliad were, at one time, orally composed narratives chanted to rhythmic
music. And if they still appeal to us today in their desiccated, written form,
imagine how powerful they were when originally spoken.
One
measure of how powerful they were lies in the fact that they were orally
maintained for hundreds of years before being written down as sacred texts. By
way of comparison, Shakespeare's plays weren't treated with even half that kind
of devotion by his contemporaries. Indeed, if it weren't for the belated
efforts of a few of Shakespeare's fellow players, the plays would have been
completely lost to us. So we shouldn't be so ready to dismiss oral poetry as
simplistic and not worthy of our attention. After all, at one time, it caught
everybody's attention. I realize this slight rearrangement of written poetry's
place in the scheme of things runs directly counter to the beliefs of our
poetry culture, which sees the only poetry being a written poetry. It is a
position that it holds with all the tenacity of revealed truth. But having
started out on the written side of poetry a lifetime ago only to end up on the
oral side for reasons I still don't fully comprehend, I can say that although
their surfaces are different, the unique moment of awareness that only poetry
brings is present in both forms.
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Most
poets have given up the ear for the eye.
It is a sad fact
that poetry has closed itself off from all but its academic audience. There are
those who will tell you that poetry's audience has always been more or less
academic (or elitist), just as poetry itself has always been (in large part) private,
dense, elaborate, and un-speechlike. To some degree they're correct, because
the very act of writing allows (and often encourages) such tendencies. But we
shouldn't mistake writing's tendencies for poetry's true north, because the
poetry we have valued over the centuries clearly proves poetry's desire to
speak clearly and to communicate on the most human of levels.
Shakespeare
is proof of this, as are Homer, Donne, Marvell, Herrick, Blake, Whitman,
Dickinson, Frost, Yeats, Hardy, and, to name a few contemporaries, Sharon Olds,
Philip Levine, Stephen Dunn, and Gerald Stern. It is only in an age where
poetry has become so confused by the scholarly needs of the academies that
house it that such an exclusionist argument would even be considered. Or that poet
after poet could seriously tell you that poetry doesn't need an audience. Or
that they write only for other poets. Or that the act of poetry is enough by
itself.
While
all these positions have validity, we shouldn’t forget that poetry is our most
human and most profound form of communication. It is the way the soul speaks.
Poetry is an act of communication—the real news, as Pound once said. If
it’s not, why bother to show it to others? Or even write it down. Why not let
it just run through our heads like smoke?
There
is nothing more dangerous for poetry, or any art, than its current isolation.
It bespeaks a selfishness and lack of generosity that no art can endure for
long. Oral poetry is one path to take
to remedy that situation—if we have the courage and heart. Similarly, by
honoring the inherent nature of oral composition (in the same way as much of
the great written poetry of the past), we can substantially alter the course of
some part of written poetry so that it will be more responsive to the audience
struggling to find it.
We
have truly begun to mistake the totem for the god—mistaking literature for
poetry. We are becoming more writers than poets, and all this at a time when
exactly the opposite is being called for. If poetry is to thrive, we must
become more poets than writers. We must return to poetry's ancient, spoken,
songlike roots, if not to practice that form of poetry, then, at the very
least, to honor its principles in our writing. To see just how far we have
strayed, we merely have to look at the bête noir of contemporary poetry:
the line break. Once we do, we should realize we have become more concerned
with poetry's effect on the eye than the ear, because that is always the
direction writing takes us.
A
cursory examination of the line breaks being used today (and the rationales
behind them) should convince us we are losing our sense of song—of true,
musical cadence. Some of these rationales, if they can be called that, can be
found in A Field Guide to Contemporary Poetry and Poetics (Longman
Press, 1980). Today, in place of the traditional line break, we have
(both consciously and unconsciously) taken up a kind of typographical scan/beat
line break that works on the eye rather than the ear, bumping the eye from one
line to the next in a rhythmic way. And it can work quite well if done
correctly. The line breaks of Sharon Olds’ poems often fall into this modern
format. The following is an example from a wonderful poem, I Cannot Forget
the Woman in the Mirror:
Backwards
and upside down in the twilight, that
woman
on all fours, her head
dangling
and confused, her lean
haunches,
the area of darkness, the flanks and
ass
narrow and pale as a deer’s and those
breasts
hanging down toward the center of the earth
like plummets, when I
swayed
from side to side they swayed, it was
so
dark I couldn’t tell if they were gold or
plum
or rose. I cannot get over her . . .
When
the poem is spoken, however, and her line breaks observed as true rests, with
the speaking of the line itself culminating in a slight rise in pitch, or tone,
the result is awkward music at best. And poets know it. At many readings poets
mercifully ignore their own line breaks. But you can't have it both ways.
Either the line break is the equivalent of a rest, and is to be observed as
such, or it isn't. If composers scored their works the way our poets do, we'd
have chaos in the orchestra pit. If you write the break one way, you should
read it that way: silently or aloud. Or else give up the pretense that
contemporary poetry is meant to be spoken out loud, or have any relation to its
spoken roots.
Poets
experienced a similar problem, but in reverse, in the late fifteenth,
sixteenth, and early seventeenth centuries. They were trying to accommodate the
speech-cadenced rhythms still bumping around in their heads from the semi-oral
age that preceded the introduction of the printing press in the mid-fifteenth
century. Skelton's (b.1460) sometimes uneven, odd, three-stress line has always
bedeviled scholars because it has none of the ease of the ballad measure or the
majesty of pentameter, but anyone who has worked orally knows it speaks quite
well, and especially to rhythmic music. And Skelton, if anything, was a talker.
To
Mistress Isabel Pennel
By
Saint Mary, my lady,
Your
mammy and your daddy
Brought
forth a goodly baby.
My
maiden Isabel,
Reflaring
Rosabel,
The
flagrant camomel,
The
ruddy rosary,
The
sovereign rosemary,
The
pretty strawberry,
The
columbine, the mept,
The
jelafen well set
The
proper violet;
To
hear this nightingale
Among
the birdes small
Was
bling in the vale,
Ding,
ding
Jing,
jing
Good
year and good luck!
With
chuck, chuck, chuck, chuck.
A
hundred years later, those oral rhythms were still bothering John Donne, who
scored his poems with special accent and slur marks in an attempt to introduce
a speech-like quality to his iambic pentameter line. After all, how things sounded
was important to men like Donne and Shakespeare. The oral arts were still very
much in the air all around them. Donne’s markings, of course, have gone the way
of the typesetter's wastebasket. We don’t care what it sounds like. We
want our poems to be composed in a written language, not some crazy
oral/written hybrid. This pursuit of a solely written aesthetic has gone so far
in our times that we are now unconsciously hell-bent on removing any reference
to the oral tradition. And the one major oral reference still left in written
poetry is the spoken pause created and inferred by the line break. Line breaks,
of course, came about as a way of written poetry imitating the inherent cadence
and rests of oral poetry. Today, however, it bedevils our poets to no end
because they no longer truly see poetry as an oral/aural art. They may pay lip
service to the act of speaking poetry, but in reality, most poets have given up
the ear for the eye.
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The
Encroaching Sea of Orality
It
is the task of each generation to recast its songs
in
a language unique to that generation.
This is not the
first alarm sounded that something has gone wrong with our art. Other bells are
being sounded all the time. Some time ago Dana Gioia received somewhat of a
drubbing for doing so. And yet his observations on the state of written poetry
(in the May, 1991 Atlantic Monthly) are on the mark, as are most of his
suggestions on how to correct the situation. But no matter how much you adjust,
as he suggests, the way written poetry is criticized and brought to the public,
or how many different ways you vary the format of poetry readings and deal with
the phenomenon of MFA programs that produce hundreds (if not thousands) of very
good writers we are accepting as poets but are often not (they are simply just
very good poetic writers), the problem still remains: we are producing a
written poetry today that is simply out of touch with a culture that is
becoming increasingly oral.
It
is the task of each generation to recast its songs in a language unique to that
generation—a language that speaks both of, and to, that generation. But even
putting the question of oral poetry aside (focusing only on written poetry and
its ability to accommodate an increasingly oral culture), it is clear that not
only are we failing at the task of recasting our songs, but we are also
abominably slow in recognizing it. Even if we take the school of poetry we have
today which sees itself as immediate and speechlike (and indeed it has some of
these qualities), it is the exquisite end result of a tradition which calls for
the writing and silent reading of a poem as its way of creation and
appreciation. It is also a tradition which is directly opposed to the type of
spoken poetry our times are calling for. The poetry coming from our more
"immediate" and "speech-like" school (for example, Godine's
New American Poets of the 90s) is just as “written” as its formalist
counterpart. When spoken, these poems are so dense and unlike speech as to be
almost incomprehensible after a few minutes. The ear simply refuses to work.
Here are a few examples from that anthology to illustrate this point. If you
have any doubts about being able to hear these poems easily, read the
selections (the opening lines of each poem) out loud to some friends and see
how long they sit still.
Brother
of the Mount of Olives (Paul Monette)
Combing
the attic for anything extra
missed
or missing evidence of us I sift